Username   Password  
Remember   Register   |   Forgot your password?

Chapter 1 - In the pitch black

If you want to add an oc tell me!!!

*this is a scary story for ages 12 and up*

Chapter 1 - In the pitch black

Chapter 1 - In the pitch black
Key: *main people*
Opheus-18 *has a gothic-like personality very shy black hair with red and blue hair lights* shadow is her boyfriend. (O) nickname-ophelia
Shadow-20 *dark personality very mysterious* Opheus is his Girlfriend (Sh)



Chapter 1
In the pitch black...

It was a dark afternoon and a blue hedgehog walks along with his fox friend...

T: Hey sonic don't you feel like your....being watched?
S: No....why do you ask?
T: I feel like someone is......*gasps* Terisa....
S: What?
Te: TAILS! *topples him*
T: *muffled* Terisa get...off!
Te: *kisses him* Mmmmwuah I missed you soooooo much! I need your help! PLEASE!
T: What is it?
Te: It's Rosy she's gone...
T: HUH?
Sh: Whats going?
Te: Rosy's missing...
Sh: I haven't seen Ophelia in a while
S: Haven't seen Amy either...
?: They've been kidnapped...
S,Sh,T,&Te: WHA?
?: It was Dr.Eggman....he....*faints*
Te: He's injured and there's blood all over the place!
?: *wakens* Huh? My head...
Te: Need anything?
?: No...
Te: Ok...Whats your name Mr?
R: Its Raban, and you are?
Te: Terisa
R: Hmm...
Te: Is something wrong?
R: No...
Te: Any friends?
R: Just a couple...
Te: Can you tell me they're names?
R: Well...
Te: Go ahead... hey whats that sound?
*a rumbling sound is shaking the ground terisa is screaming in Rabans wings but Raban knows what is wrong*
Te: WHATS GOING ON!
R: Opheus...
Te: Don't you mean Ophelia......OPHELIA! SHADOW!
Sh: What!
S: HEY! Amy is outside! AMY *waves*
A: S..Sonic....no..its...a........
S: AMY! WHOAH!
Dr: Hello sonic.
S: Eggman! Let Amy GO!
A: sonic...
Dr: Come *yanks Amy's arm*
A: OW!
?: Let her go...
Sh: ophelia...
O: I SAID *pauses and stares at shadow*
Sh: *stares at Ophelia*
Dr: BWAHAHAHAHA! TAKE THIS HEDGEHOG!
*The DIABOLICAL doctor takes a knife and cuts amy's neck. While Amy screams blood drips down her wounds she drops to the floor crying in her pain looking at sonics eyes as if it was her last moment alive and faints*
S: AMY! NO! *kicks himself free and runs to her*
S: Amy *cries* don't DIE on me please oh god please god don't take her.
A: Sonic...
O: YOU dog TAKE THIS! *A gigantic beam comes out of her furious eyes right at eggman*
Dr: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa *flies off*
S:.....She's dead!
O: No....she is unconsious but breathing low we have to take her to a doctor fast!
S: Fast is my middle name *runs to the hospitle with Amy breathing deathly ill but she is very stiff and very tired...*
Do: She'll be fine but she needs rest how did she get that cut?
S: Doctor Eggman...he cut her neck...
Ro: Is Amy ok?
Do: Yes...uh who ARE you?
Ro: Rosy I'm Amy's couzin.
Do: Yes you may see her in a couple of minuets...
*Rosy looks at sonic and thinks*
Ro: You Amy's boyfriend?
S: WHAT! NO!
Ro: Amy said she had a hot and sexy lookin' hedgehog *touches his leg* and I thought you were him *slides her hand closer up his leg*
S: *gulps then shivers as he watches her hand slide inbetween his legs* Uhh... soo wanna go for some coffee?
Ro: Sure *smiles and removes her hand*
S: Whew...
*Rosy gets up and moves towards the door*
S: (man she's good i'm glad she didn't....uh oh she's coming back)
Ro: Sooo whats your name? *leans toward his face*
S: S...S...Sonic...
Ro: Mine's Rosy *moves closer*
S: Uh... *gulps and shivers even more than the last time*
Ro: What time do you wanna go for coffee? *leans closer and closer*
S: *gets up and immediatly says* 3pm!
Ro: Ok! *gives him a weird glare*
Do: Rosy, sonic Amy would like to see you now *looks to see Rosy kissing sonic*
Ro: Hmm *jumps* Uhh OK SORRY UH...WERE MARRIED!
Do: Oh ok that explains everything *smiles*
S: WHA!?!
Ro: Lets go hunney!*Nudges sonic*
S: *runs into the room and goes to sonic house*
A: Sonic, ROSY! OMG ITS YOU! *coughs harshly*
Ro: Rest little couz you need it after your hard day.
S: Yeah *kisses her head* we'll see you in a bit ok. *leaves room*
S: ARE YOU NUTS!
Ro: Its better than bein embarresed
S: YOU HAD TO KISS ME DIDN'T YOU!
Ro: Well *blushes and stands closely near sonic*
S: Uh... *blushes* OH NO *move against the wall*
Ro: *smiles* Your funny *moves closer* and smart *closer* talented *closer then leans against him* ......*in a whispery voice* charming *kisses him hard and tosses on his bed...*
*later that night*
O: Glad you could make it.
Sh: You called?
O:.....I missed you shadow...
Sh: Me too...*holds Ophelias sholders and leans in and they kiss out in the cold while the wind was softly whistling in they're ears shadows hands on Ophelias skirt and her hands around Shadow's neck*
Dr: Aww. soo cute to bad I have to RUIN IT! *takes Ophelia*
O: SHADOW HELP!
Sh: OPHELIA *gets knocked out by eggmans impresivly strong Robot* ophelia...*as he passes out he heres Ophelia's faint cries of help he keeps whispering her name then finnaly blacks out*
*BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP*
S: *yawns* Ahh what a great nights sleep....WUAG! HOLY...Rosy! Wheres my clothes? Oh shoot! *gets up to find Rosy in his bed then trips on her clothes* Eew. *puts pants on* Maybe we didn't uh DO it maybe it was a dream *walks out of the room*
*A couple minuets later Rosy wakes up*
Ro: *yawns* huh? AGH *puts clothes on and rushes out the door*
S: Shadow?
Sh: Ugh sonic *gets up* OPHELIA *glances around* She really is gone is she?
S: Guess so.... what happened?
Sh: We were kissing...then eggman came and TOOK her away from my grasp *squeezes hands* I couldn't save her....I couldn't.... what happened to you? Whats with the lipstick marks?
S: You don't want to know...
*Shadow, creeped out by the thought shivers*
Sh: Lets go.

(will they find Ophelia will sonic find out the CREEPY truth about what happened last night will Amy recover to find out what happened? Find out on the NEXT CHAPTER!)

Comments

Comments (6)

You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment

gonemad on September 8, 2007, 11:04:40 AM

gonemad on
gonemaddie, amy. i dont like her! but, this is cool

gonemad on September 8, 2007, 11:04:37 AM

gonemad on
gonemaddie, amy. i dont like her! but, this is cool

Doomlord1234 on June 22, 2007, 1:01:32 AM

Doomlord1234 on
Doomlord1234holy kinigets! sweeeeeeeeeet!!!

Shadowdahedgehog on June 25, 2007, 2:46:02 AM

Shadowdahedgehog on
ShadowdahedgehogWe are da knights who say.......NEE
*later*
We are know the knights who say...ickyickyknnnnnnnigets!
lol

BlazingKeyblade on June 21, 2007, 11:38:28 AM

BlazingKeyblade on
BlazingKeybladeawesome story!! this kicks @$$ :3 and i cant wait for the nest chapter ^^ *Faves*

BlazingKeyblade on June 21, 2007, 4:38:32 PM

BlazingKeyblade on
BlazingKeybladenext*