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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1

This is a story of my two fancharacters Kyatoriina and Jasutin and how they get involved with Sonic The hedgehog. Enjoy!

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1


Jasutin sat in his room, waiting to use the phone. His foster sister was busy
chatting away on it, as usual. He wanted to talk to Kyatoriina, some he met in
school, a couple of months ago. It was summer vacation, and all was fun and
games except for one person. Jasutin.

        Jasutin was an orange hedgehog, who had yellow and black stripes/ streaks
throughout all of his quills. But something else made him different from the
teal colored foster family. He had to special body parts. A mechanical left arm
and left eye. He lost them in a freak accident. One of Dr. Eggmans patrolling
robots began to malfunction and explode, very close to Jasutin, sending him
several feet into the air. When he landed he fell unconscious, and his left arm
was completely dismantled, as well as his eye. He layed on the charred sidewalk,
as an ambulance eventually came and picked him up.

        His condition in the hospital was very unstable so, a scientist (Dr. Prower)
offered to use his knowledge to replace to missing parts with mechanical parts,
and after several weeks of intense research and assembling, Jasutins eye and arm
was replaced by mechanical replicas of an eye and an arm. Jasutin couldn't pay
the scientist though. Little did Jasutin know, medical research scientist were
at large, set by the given rules of Dr. Eggman. He told Jasutin that he
wouldn't accept his money, and then told him maybe someday they would meet.
That's when Jasutin took up technological development.

        Days went by as he began to create objects of every day use out of wires and
circuit boards. About two weeks later, through the news, Dr Prower was killed,
and all of his laboratory work was destroyed. Depression overwhelmed him. He
thoughts began to wonder, and with his thoughts went his social manner. He
became instantly quiet and rarely spoke to anyone. But one was still sure;
Jasutin dedicated himself to technology and its development. It happened at age
13. He is now 19 years old. Right now, he is attempting to create a robot that
would be able to help doctors and nurses through busy times, like during
operations, or medical emergencies like him. But his focus has been off of
technology for a while. His thoughts were on a girl hedgehog names Kyatoriina.

        He loves her with every part of his heart. He doesn't know what he would do.
She was the only one that kept him alive. His depression sometimes would
completely take over his mind, but when he would talk to her, she was able to
calm him down and help him stop thinking the bad thoughts of suicide. Without
her, he thought, I would be lost. He even built a rickety street bike from
scratch, just so he could visit her when ever he wanted to.

        Jasutin has no parents to this date. He did, or so he thinks, but they left him
at a very early age. He never even knew that they would exist, unless his foster
parents and orphanage would remind him of them. But still, he always felt that
they weren't at all important in their lives.

        He sat in his chair, looking and looking at his walls, containing posters of
some of the music bands he listens to. He played guitar too, as it sat in the
corner of the room, with a bunch of rickety circuit boards and wires, from him
experimenting from random objects from the dump. He waited for his foster
sister and still nothing. She was still gabbing on about her social life. It
was beginning to bother him. He really wanted to talk to her. But he couldn't.
He would go and visit her on his bike, but it was fresh out of gas. He felt
vulnerable and that Kyatoriina would get upset.

        One other thing that bothered Jasutin, was that his foster dad was an heavy
alcoholic. He rarely drank, but when he did, you had to be very careful. He was
very abusive, and was very unpredictable. He hated it when his dad would get
back home from heavily drinking. Today was his birthday, and both his mom and
dad ( HE doesn't usually call them foster parents anymore, just refers them as
mom and dad) were out drinking, while he stayed home with his sister, Angela.
They usually didn't get along, but when they needed to, the felt like they
could talk to each other.

        Finally, after a couple of hours she came back with the phone, and handed it to
him. He quickly dialed her number, but to his heed, one of her friends had
answered the phone. She told him that she was out near the beach waiting for
him to come. He wasn't really sure if she was lying or not, but he really
wanted to talk to her. “But I don't have anymore gas…” replied Jasutin, as he
sighed heavily to himself.

        “Ohh she should be there to pick you up!” added the girl's voice.

        Then, he heard to honks of a car horn. It was her. He dropped the phone as he
saw her. “I thought maybe we could go spend some time on the beach? What do you
say?” added Kyatoriina, as her pink convertible was down.

        He leaped in the vehicle, as his depressing feelings left him as she pulled out
of the driveway. After several minutes of talking to each other and driving,
they arrived to the Metropolis beach. Jasutin leaped back out, as Kyatoriina
opened her door and walked out to stretch her body, stiff from driving the car.
He walked over to the female hedgehog and hugged her greatly. He loved her with
everything he had. “Let's go for a walk!” offered Kyatoriina, as Jasutin
nodded, and gripped her hand firmly.

        The beach was fairly busy; tons of people were there, enjoying themselves. He
knew that he was enjoying himself. He looked at Kyatoriina, as he noticed she
was wearing a pink tank top, a pink cowboy hat, brown Capri's and turquoise
flip-flops. She looked very beautiful to him. He noticed that there was a big
commotion down near the water. He tried to focus in on who it was, and
determined it was Jun, (Sorry Jun Senoue, but I couldn't think of a characters
name, I won't use your last name though ^_-) one of Jasutin's friends from
school. He was being pushed around. “Um, Kat, let's go over here first!” added
Jasutin, as he grimaced while guiding his feet through the hot heat of the
sand.

        Jun was being pushed around by a group of bigger hedgehogs. “Hey, buzz off!”
Yelled Jasutin, as they turned to see the, rather tall, hedgehog.

        They all split up as they were very intimidated by his fierce size.
Jasutin lowered his arm down, to help Jun back on his feet. “Thanks Jasutin.
They always pick on me. I'm way too short! Oh, hi Kyatoriina!” added Jun as he
smiled at her.

        Jun was a small hedgehog at three feet and two inches. His skin was
pale, and his fur was yellow. He had blue zigzags in his quills. He wore a
brown leather vest, and basketball shorts. He played drums, and both were
looking to start up a band but weren't really having any success. “Well, I got
to go. Later!” said the hedgehog, as he waved bye and began to walk up the
beach.

        “So, where do you want to go?” asked Katrina, as she smiled at Justin.

        “Were ever you wanted to go? It doesn't matter to me!”

        “Are you sure?”

        “One hundred percent positive, trust me, I trust you!”

        She smiled and giggled slightly as they began to walk in a specific
direction. He held her hand firmly again as she looked up at him with his cute
brown eyes. “ So, it's your dads Birthday party, isn't it…” she stopped as a
rather large robot was seen back were they came from.

        Both Katrina and Justin turned around to see the large robot. “Dr.
Eggman again?” asked Jasutin.

        Katrina was really scared, as the thought of being captured filled her
head. “Wait here.” added Jasutin.




Jasutin walked off, as she felt like something was going to happen. She felt like she might lose him.
She didn't want to lose him. “Jasutin…” murmured Kyatoriina, as she watched him run towards the robot.



Jasutin kept up a fast pace, only to see something unusual. A blue hedgehog appeared out of no where, and faced the giant robot. `What is he doing?' thought Jasutin as he watched the hedgehog stand in front of the oncoming robot. He stood there and watched as the blue creature blurred around the robot, creating massive holes through it.

Jasutin remained speechless. His mind just couldn't comprehend what had just happened. He went to go turn around and another robot stood behind Kyatoriina. “Kat, watch out! Move!” yelled Jasutin, as he quickly attempted to dash towards her.




She turned around and screamed. The robot had grabbed her around the waist, and began to take flight. He jumped just as the robot began to lift off the ground, and grabbed on the leg of the mechanical figure. The robot began to shoot some kind of gun at him, eventually hitting him, sending him to the ground below him. The blast was enough to disintegrate the fake skin that covered his mechanical arm, and luckily for him he shielded himself with it, to avoid getting hurt. He landed with
a rough bump, as his body bounced off the soft, unbound sand. “No…” muffled the hedgehog as he tightly grabbed a handful of sand.



“I let her down.”



Just as Jasutin fell, the blue hedgehog made his way over to him. “Hey, buddy, are you alright?” asked the unknown being.




“What does it look like to you!” added Jasutin as he slowly got up, with a lot of aching pain.




The blue creature stood back a little, almost feeling a great distaste towards him. “ Hey, chill out!”




“They got her, and now I can't SAVE HER!”




“Really? I take you have no clue who I am, do you?”




“Some random hedgehog, who thinks he's a superhero!”




The blue hedgehog laughed aloud. “Actually I am. My name is Sonic.”




Jasutin then began to process what Sonic had just said. He realized now who it exactly was. “I'm so sorry, Sonic…”




“Don't worry about it. Now, if your done trying to tell me off, I can take you to Dr. Eggmans liar.” Explained Sonic as he pointed towards a rather large building, set in the crowded area of Mobius.




Jasutin sighed as he nodded his head. “Ok.”




Both hedgehogs decided to go back into the town, to prepare for their journey into the large building, that contained all of it's evilness and malevolent theories to plot and take over the world.





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