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Chapter 1 - Daddy Dearest....

Just a poem I had to do for English, yes it is based on a true story (not me). I dont exactly remember all the details but it happened about 15 years ago.....

Chapter 1 - Daddy Dearest....

Chapter 1 - Daddy Dearest....
-...in August a 17 year old girl reportedly killed her father in self-defense. She told authorities that her father had repeatedly beat her since she was 10 years old...-

Thump - Thump
I can hear him walking closer...
Thump - Thump
His footsteps echoing in the hall...
Thump - Thump
What did I do this time?
What did I do wrong?
Thump - Thump
The smell of beer and whisky drifting closer, overpowering the once sweet perfumed air, choking my eyes.
Thump - Thump
Please, no... I'm sorry.
Thump - Thump
My cuts haven't healed, my bruises aren't gone.
Thump - Thump
The knob turns slowly, the click of the lock echos through out the cold, uncaring darkness.
I hide my head, maybe he won't find me here beneath my blanket, my shield.
...Thump - Thump
Please, just stop... Don't make me do it. My heart beating in my ears, the sharp, cold steel gripped in my hands.
Thump - Thump
Thump - Thump

His fist flung out into the darkness, swinging, aiming, reaching for me.
I only get one try, one shot, to make him stop. To make him pay.
My hand struck out into the deafening darkness, blinded by rage and tears. I hit something...
...Thump...
The red river flows.

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Kohakucrazy on July 18, 2008, 4:20:47 AM

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KohakucrazyOh wow...Very well done

DeathNoteSurvivor on April 11, 2008, 2:27:09 PM

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DeathNoteSurvivoroh wow...thats really well written.....im sorry it had to have a real life story behind it

marisa937 on April 10, 2008, 3:08:42 PM

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marisa937whoa....thats a deep story so that really happened? whoa...