Chapter 1 - A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE
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Chapter 1 - A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE
Chapter 1 - A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE
A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE
wow i had a scary dream and here it is:
I was at a hotel and i was room mates with clay and Raimondo. I also made up a lil'sister name Carolin she was in it. well Raimondo went to explore so me and clay stayed and flirted well then it got to night and clay stayed with
Carolin as i looked for rai. well this gang of bully's ran past me scared i asked them what was wrong then they just pointed to a garbage so i walk up to it and inside was rai dead shot in the stomach and in the forehead. so i
went back to the hotel sad and scared. then it got pitch black so i stuck my hand up against the
hotel building to find the door as i slid my hand up against the wall i touch a mans chest and he reached out like he was going
to grab me so i ran and ended up finding the door to the hotel. i ran all the way to our room the shadowed figure didn't follow. so when i walked into are room i found Carolin in a corner crying.
i went and picked her up and asked her what was wrong she pointed to the bathrooms bloody door. i set her on
the bed and ran in to the room thier on the floor was clay his body shreeded and bloody. on the mirrior the parts that weren't broken said whats next? then i woke up with Carolin crying
on my chest in her sleep and i was in the same hotel just with my family and their were to TVs one had a scary movie on and the other xiaolin showdown so i turned them both off and woke up it was the scaryest dream i had ever had the worst partis that it was a double dream.
wow i had a scary dream and here it is:
I was at a hotel and i was room mates with clay and Raimondo. I also made up a lil'sister name Carolin she was in it. well Raimondo went to explore so me and clay stayed and flirted well then it got to night and clay stayed with
Carolin as i looked for rai. well this gang of bully's ran past me scared i asked them what was wrong then they just pointed to a garbage so i walk up to it and inside was rai dead shot in the stomach and in the forehead. so i
went back to the hotel sad and scared. then it got pitch black so i stuck my hand up against the
hotel building to find the door as i slid my hand up against the wall i touch a mans chest and he reached out like he was going
to grab me so i ran and ended up finding the door to the hotel. i ran all the way to our room the shadowed figure didn't follow. so when i walked into are room i found Carolin in a corner crying.
i went and picked her up and asked her what was wrong she pointed to the bathrooms bloody door. i set her on
the bed and ran in to the room thier on the floor was clay his body shreeded and bloody. on the mirrior the parts that weren't broken said whats next? then i woke up with Carolin crying
on my chest in her sleep and i was in the same hotel just with my family and their were to TVs one had a scary movie on and the other xiaolin showdown so i turned them both off and woke up it was the scaryest dream i had ever had the worst partis that it was a double dream.
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1/5 (Meh)
First of all, if it's scary, describe MORE GORE and make it a higher violence rating. Second, this deserves a moderate violence. No blood= Mild, Blood= Moderate, Limb from Limb Screach Wreching Gore= Explicit. Third of all, it's too short and not detailed enough. Just follow these three tips. Flesh it out, Pull more people's flesh out, Put a higher rating of flesh on it. Fleshy de flesh flesh,
Aidan Flesh Aenima