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Chapter 1 - A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE

*WARNING*
THIS DREAM HAS VIOLENCE, AND GORY. IF YOU GET EASILY UPSET OR NAUSEATED THIS MAY NOT BE THE BEST THING FOR YOU TO READ 
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Chapter 1 - A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE

Chapter 1 - A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE
A NIGHTMARE SO SCARY TO SHARE

                                wow i had a scary dream and here it is:
I was at a hotel and i was room mates with clay and Raimondo. I also made up a lil'sister name Carolin she was in it. well Raimondo went to explore so me and clay stayed and flirted well then it got to night and clay stayed with

        Carolin as i looked for rai. well this gang of bully's ran past me scared i asked them what was wrong then they just pointed to a garbage so i walk up to it and inside was rai dead shot in the stomach and in the forehead. so i
went back to the hotel sad and scared. then it got pitch black so i stuck my hand up against the
       hotel building to find the door as i slid my hand up against the wall i touch a mans chest and he reached out like he was going
to grab me so i ran and ended up finding the door to the hotel. i ran all the way to our room the shadowed figure didn't follow. so when i walked into are room i found Carolin in a corner crying.
         i went and picked her up and asked her what was wrong she pointed to the bathrooms bloody door. i set her on
the bed and ran in to the room thier on the floor was clay his body shreeded and bloody. on the mirrior the parts that weren't broken said whats next? then i woke up with Carolin crying
         on my chest in her sleep and i was in the same hotel just with my family and their were to TVs one had a scary movie on and the other xiaolin showdown so i turned them both off and woke up it was the scaryest dream i had ever had the worst partis that it was a double dream.

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power9x on August 18, 2007, 1:07:36 PM

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power9xWell, I know this isn't really a fic, so I can't really review it, but its your writing, so here it goes:
1/5 (Meh)

First of all, if it's scary, describe MORE GORE and make it a higher violence rating. Second, this deserves a moderate violence. No blood= Mild, Blood= Moderate, Limb from Limb Screach Wreching Gore= Explicit. Third of all, it's too short and not detailed enough. Just follow these three tips. Flesh it out, Pull more people's flesh out, Put a higher rating of flesh on it. Fleshy de flesh flesh,
Aidan Flesh Aenima

SkyGirl on August 18, 2007, 1:43:04 PM

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SkyGirlthis is a real dream i didn't make it up

power9x on August 18, 2007, 2:12:05 PM

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power9xI know that. I was reviewing how you wrote the dream. If you don't want to add more to it, then fine, but still, elaborate and edit it a bit.

Kimikoprincesspancho on February 19, 2007, 10:45:41 PM

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KimikoprincesspanchoI hate nightmares!

sparkiestar on January 9, 2007, 4:55:30 AM

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sparkiestari hate those kinda dreams they scares me...
*sits in corner*never get double dreams.if i had that dream i would of woke up screaming.

Love2talk11 on December 28, 2006, 11:00:07 AM

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Love2talk11i hate those dreams.
I once had a triple dream when i was very sick it was so outta control!!! 

vesblondie on December 25, 2006, 11:44:12 AM

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vesblondie>< I HATE THOSE DREAMS!!!! they weird me out....THAT'S ONE WEIRD NIGHTMARE!!!! D:

SkyGirl on December 25, 2006, 12:19:34 PM

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SkyGirlI WOKE UP SHOCKED IT WAS BAD I NEARLY CRYIED BUT I WAS
MENTALY TO SAD FOR SOME RESONE I FEEL THEY CONTACT ME IN MY
DREAMS BECAUSE IF I HAVE A DREAM ITS ALWAYS ABOUT XIAOLIN SHOWDOWN NOTHING ELSE.

FluffleMuffin on December 25, 2006, 3:14:28 AM

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FluffleMuffinO_O I hate those dreams! That's really scary.
One time I had this really strange dream where I was running. I wass trying to wake up, but then I just fell back to sleep. It happened over and over again! It freaked me out. :[

SkyGirl on December 25, 2006, 7:56:30 AM

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SkyGirlwow that really sucks what i do when that happens is think
of my cartoon crushand i usually have good dreams or no
dreams

FluffleMuffin on January 10, 2007, 8:33:06 AM

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FluffleMuffinThat works for me, too!
I always think up a boring, pointless, mushy love story to help myself go to sleep. Works everytime.
Then i'll have some ridiculously strange (but often funny) dream.
lol.
I'll tell you one if you'd like.

SkyGirl on January 10, 2007, 8:35:26 AM

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SkyGirlokay cool sure i am all ears

InvaderEztheGothic on December 20, 2006, 10:50:11 PM

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InvaderEztheGothic*favz* NOW THAT is a nitemare! I hate double dreams!

laurelrokz on December 18, 2006, 10:23:11 AM

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laurelrokzOMG!!!!If hailey read this she would flip.

SkyGirl on December 18, 2006, 10:24:29 AM

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SkyGirlwho is hailey do i know her i call every one by their fax names.

laurelrokz on December 18, 2006, 10:27:21 AM

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laurelrokzShe is Invaderleroy.
I call her Waffles.I'm Pancakes, Mira's Milk.WE ARE FOODTACULAR!!!!!

SkyGirl on December 18, 2006, 10:29:41 AM

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SkyGirlcool tell all your friends i write storys and stuff nobody reads my work most of the time.