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can't we all just get along

me:hi this is my first storie I hope you enjoy it and if you want your characters to be in it you can just ask me

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - can't we all just get along
Submitted: April 18, 2007 • Updated: April 18, 2007
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Chapter 2 - can't we all just get along
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Chapter 3 - can't we all just get along
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Chapter 4 - can't we just all get along
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Chapter 5 - oh comon
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Chapter 6 - the enterview
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Chapter 7 - shikamaru dies^-^
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Chapter 8 - wtf
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Chapter 9 - hhmmm
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Chapter 10 - oh yah
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Chapter 11 - the battle
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Chapter 12 - the second battle
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Chapter 13 - battle 3
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Chapter 14 - battle 4
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Chapter 15 - continue
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Chapter 16 - the 5 th battle
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Chapter 17 - chuning exams...
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Chapter 18 - the new friends
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Chapter 19 - o.O
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Chapter 20 - wth
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Chapter 21 - the sleep ove starts
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Chapter 21 - the sleep ove starts
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Chapter 22 - lollypop!
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Chapter 23 - truth or dare muhahah
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Chapter 24 - pawt two...
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Chapter 25 - laa
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Chapter 26 - more friends^_________^
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Chapter 27 - D:
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Chapter 28 - fweaky...
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Chapter 29 - lollypops
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Chapter 30 - you hear sumtin
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Chapter 31 - the fweaky
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Chapter 32 - ouch
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Chapter 33 - hahah
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Chapter 34 - school
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Chapter 35 - songs
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Chapter 36 - another friend and another song
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Chapter 37 - yay water :D:D:D:D XD
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Chapter 38 - glamorouse
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Chapter 39 - bombs
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Chapter 40 - more school
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Chapter 41 - everyones run
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Chapter 42 - noes
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Chapter 43 - blow em up
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Chapter 44 - complaints
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Chapter 45 - schooool
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Chapter 46 - continued ^^
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Chapter 47 - on the air plane
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Chapter 48 - finally
Submitted: August 11, 2007 • Updated: August 11, 2007
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jackerah on October 2, 2007, 11:57:11 AM

jackerah on (Chapter: index)
jackerahHey this story is cool^^

SonicDX1995 on August 5, 2007, 9:06:40 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995notice:chapter comming soon I've been studing writing so it should be moore interesting ^___^

guten :3

wolf-girl-ghost on June 18, 2007, 7:00:55 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 47)
wolf-girl-ghostWOOO AFRICA!

SonicDX1995 on August 5, 2007, 9:02:37 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 47)
SonicDX1995yeah >D

Lordfury on July 29, 2007, 8:53:47 AM

Lordfury on (Chapter: 47)
Lordfuryhurry up and add more chapters

Lordfury on July 8, 2007, 11:07:29 AM

Lordfury on (Chapter: 47)
Lordfurykilling time

power9x on June 23, 2007, 7:10:22 AM

power9x on (Chapter: index)
power9xIt wasn't that good. I'm being honest. I'll go read your other stuff before saying that you suck at writing. If you want to see a really good fanfic, come on down and check out my 6 that I have here. My tips for it is to develop the characters more and to put more chapters together. Well, bye.

KidRaccoon on June 18, 2007, 6:05:35 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 47)
KidRaccoonALRIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

SonicDX1995 on June 20, 2007, 5:39:30 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 47)
SonicDX1995it's the only thing I could think of

KidRaccoon on June 20, 2007, 5:52:03 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonThat's okay, yeah. But try to put "yeah" at the end of my sentences, yeah. ^^

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:43:01 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 13)
Hyperstar90Lolly pops and rabies wierd combination XD

SonicDX1995 on June 2, 2007, 6:41:08 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 13)
SonicDX1995XD

kittyshootingstar on June 2, 2007, 5:02:40 AM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 46)
kittyshootingstarLOL I hate shots too

SonicDX1995 on June 2, 2007, 5:07:14 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 46)
SonicDX1995>.< they hurt D:

kittyshootingstar on June 2, 2007, 5:10:50 AM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: index)
kittyshootingstarYeah. XP

SonicDX1995 on June 2, 2007, 5:58:54 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995D:

kittyshootingstar on June 2, 2007, 5:02:09 AM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 39)
kittyshootingstarBOOMEH!

LOL

kittyshootingstar on June 2, 2007, 4:59:49 AM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 22)
kittyshootingstarLOLOLOLLIPOPLOLOL!!!

SonicDX1995 on June 2, 2007, 5:00:05 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 22)
SonicDX1995rotfl XD

kittyshootingstar on June 2, 2007, 4:57:11 AM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 20)
kittyshootingstarI think my "l" and "o" keys are going to break if I LOL any more!

kittyshootingstar on June 2, 2007, 4:52:26 AM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 11)
kittyshootingstarOh ma, I need to take a break from reading this I'm laughing so hard!

SonicDX1995 on June 2, 2007, 4:55:49 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 11)
SonicDX1995XD

kittyshootingstar on June 2, 2007, 4:51:15 AM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 7)
kittyshootingstarLOLOL

kittyshootingstar on June 2, 2007, 4:50:59 AM

kittyshootingstar on (Chapter: 2)
kittyshootingstarLOL

PunkWolfGirl on June 1, 2007, 1:51:11 AM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 46)
PunkWolfGirlLAWL!!! xDDDDDD Rollerblading In Africa LMAO! xDDD FUNNEH!

SonicDX1995 on June 1, 2007, 2:23:22 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 46)
SonicDX1995I think it's funny cause I'm scared of shots

Saluki on June 1, 2007, 1:38:14 AM

Saluki on (Chapter: 46)
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SonicDX1995 on June 1, 2007, 2:22:53 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 46)
SonicDX1995:D

Lordfury on May 31, 2007, 9:21:51 PM

Lordfury on (Chapter: 45)
LordfuryI WANT MORE LINES

SonicDX1995 on June 1, 2007, 1:26:16 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 45)
SonicDX1995ok

super_sonic2000 on May 31, 2007, 9:39:58 AM

super_sonic2000 on (Chapter: 45)
super_sonic2000lol no wait not lol roflol. classic!!!

SonicDX1995 on May 31, 2007, 9:42:22 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 45)
SonicDX1995XD

KidRaccoon on May 31, 2007, 7:56:53 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 45)
KidRaccoon*falls off chair*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THE NIGHTMARE BEGINS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! X_X

SonicDX1995 on May 31, 2007, 9:23:00 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 45)
SonicDX1995no what o___O

Saluki on May 31, 2007, 6:37:12 AM

Saluki on (Chapter: 45)
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SonicDX1995 on May 31, 2007, 6:53:10 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 45)
SonicDX1995XDXD

wolf-girl-ghost on May 31, 2007, 4:55:48 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 45)
wolf-girl-ghostXDDD Roller skating in africa, ur so original!

SonicDX1995 on May 31, 2007, 6:52:57 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 45)
SonicDX1995I got that off of a TV show called ned's classifyed but I changed it alittle XD

Saluki on May 30, 2007, 6:04:11 AM

Saluki on (Chapter: 44)
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SonicDX1995 on May 31, 2007, 3:46:48 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 44)
SonicDX1995XD yeah he's real

PunkWolfGirl on May 30, 2007, 5:54:36 AM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 44)
PunkWolfGirlLOL! :D

SonicDX1995 on May 30, 2007, 5:58:12 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 44)
SonicDX1995XD I like the part when I drew on someone

KidRaccoon on May 30, 2007, 5:50:51 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 44)
KidRaccoonKidRaccoon!!! KidRaccoon!!!
Does whatever a raccoon can!!!
Steals everything, tail is ringed!!!
KidRaccoon is a thing!!!
Watch out!!!
Watch out for KidRaccoon!!!

SonicDX1995 on May 30, 2007, 5:56:01 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 44)
SonicDX1995:D

wolf-girl-ghost on May 30, 2007, 4:57:15 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 44)
wolf-girl-ghostlets's go to the movies!*Runs in a wall* Priceless!!!XD

SonicDX1995 on May 30, 2007, 5:55:42 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 44)
SonicDX1995XD

Lordfury on May 28, 2007, 9:18:39 PM

Lordfury on (Chapter: index)
Lordfurymore killing

SonicDX1995 on May 30, 2007, 4:32:35 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995there will be I only add chps on friday now

KidRaccoon on May 24, 2007, 9:19:34 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 43)
KidRaccoonHey...I just realized something!!! >_o
I can hide stuff in my tail!!! :D
*hides explosives in tail*
Now I can walk around with bombs and the victims will never know!!! XD

SonicDX1995 on May 25, 2007, 5:34:27 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 43)
SonicDX1995:D awsome

Lordfury on May 22, 2007, 6:38:49 PM

Lordfury on (Chapter: index)
Lordfuryi need to kill something

SonicDX1995 on May 23, 2007, 5:17:21 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995ok I have the perfect plan

BigBrother on May 21, 2007, 1:00:51 PM

BigBrother on (Chapter: index)
BigBrotherI like this story.
Can I join????^^

SonicDX1995 on May 23, 2007, 5:16:49 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995sure :D

wolf-girl-ghost on May 20, 2007, 10:55:45 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 40)
wolf-girl-ghosti'll try to skip lmao

SonicDX1995 on May 20, 2007, 11:08:40 PM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 40)
SonicDX1995XD

KidRaccoon on May 20, 2007, 10:15:44 PM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 40)
KidRaccoonI run on all fours, yeah.
But two-leg running is tiring, yeah.

SonicDX1995 on May 20, 2007, 11:08:32 PM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 40)
SonicDX1995yeah..

wolf-girl-ghost on May 19, 2007, 1:19:21 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 39)
wolf-girl-ghostblow up yay!

SonicDX1995 on May 19, 2007, 1:27:03 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 39)
SonicDX1995:D ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^__________^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

KidRaccoon on May 19, 2007, 12:17:03 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 39)
KidRaccoonBlowing up people is so cool...XD

SonicDX1995 on May 19, 2007, 12:18:28 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 39)
SonicDX1995:D

PunkWolfGirl on May 18, 2007, 7:21:13 AM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 38)
PunkWolfGirlEXPLODING!!!!!!! -Runs Around Like An Idiot- YEAH! I WANNA EXPLODE STUFFS! :DDDDDD

SonicDX1995 on May 18, 2007, 10:01:21 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 38)
SonicDX1995yeaah :D:D:D:D:D

PunkWolfGirl on May 18, 2007, 7:18:17 AM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 35)
PunkWolfGirlxDDDDDDD :DDD Yay! Funneh! xD

SonicDX1995 on May 18, 2007, 10:01:07 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 35)
SonicDX1995^^

KidRaccoon on May 18, 2007, 5:36:40 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 38)
KidRaccoonJack likes explosions...
But who can blame him?
Explosions are fun.^^

SonicDX1995 on May 18, 2007, 10:00:57 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 38)
SonicDX1995=D yay blow em up

KidRaccoon on May 18, 2007, 11:00:42 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonKA-BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!
*Ricki runs around with his hair on fire screaming like his hair is on fire* XO
Francis: ...Hey, check it out!!!! Ricki's on fire!!!!!! ^^
Me: Shouldn't we, like, dump water on him or something??? :P
Francis: Nah...just leave him alone. His hair's so long, by the time the flame goes out, it'll look like the result of a cheap haircut.^^

wolf-girl-ghost on May 18, 2007, 6:01:45 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 37)
wolf-girl-ghostlmao gaara

SonicDX1995 on May 18, 2007, 10:00:39 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 37)
SonicDX1995yeah XD

wolf-girl-ghost on May 18, 2007, 6:03:00 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 38)
wolf-girl-ghosti can;t stop saying that now >.< its stuck in my head! 6-5=1!!!

SonicDX1995 on May 18, 2007, 10:00:30 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 38)
SonicDX1995see I tourture XD I'm good at it :D

Lordfury on May 17, 2007, 9:46:56 PM

Lordfury on (Chapter: 37)
Lordfuryyo ad me back in

SonicDX1995 on May 18, 2007, 5:09:48 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 37)
SonicDX1995hehhe I forgot about you ^^''

KidRaccoon on May 17, 2007, 7:02:08 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 37)
KidRaccoonThis reminds me of a song that Matthew made up once, before he died.
It goes something like this:
"Fat chicks eating salad.
Fat chicks eating salad, fat chicks eating salad,
Trying to loose weight to get boyfriends,
Though it'll never happen...
Cuz they're FAT CHICKS EATING SALAD!!!!!!!!!!"

SonicDX1995 on May 17, 2007, 8:42:29 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 37)
SonicDX1995haha XD funnah

KidRaccoon on May 17, 2007, 8:45:39 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonYou and Matthew probably would have good friends, if you knew him...

SonicDX1995 on May 17, 2007, 8:46:14 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995ish he real if he is SaD So SaD how did he die

KidRaccoon on May 17, 2007, 11:09:41 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonAfter Lyle left Konoha to look for a distant relative in Iwagakure, he didn't come back, so we got worried about him, and Matthew went to look for him.
Then my bro killed him. And the reason why Lyle didn't come back is because my bro killed him, too.

SonicDX1995 on May 18, 2007, 5:10:12 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995D:

wolf-girl-ghost on May 17, 2007, 1:13:36 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 36)
wolf-girl-ghostkisame:yay water :D:D:D:D:D:D lmao!!!!!!!

SonicDX1995 on May 17, 2007, 6:41:25 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 36)
SonicDX1995XD

KidRaccoon on May 16, 2007, 8:49:38 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 36)
KidRaccoonHow did you know I could swim???!!!^^

SonicDX1995 on May 17, 2007, 6:41:06 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 36)
SonicDX1995racoons know how to swim and I think almost anyone can

KidRaccoon on May 17, 2007, 6:44:50 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonThat's true!!!!^^
But I know someone who can't swim, and he don't like water, either!!!!

SonicDX1995 on May 17, 2007, 8:48:45 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995whowhowhwohwohowhowhwowhowhwow o.o.oo..o.o.o.o

RockLee9915 on May 16, 2007, 5:58:46 AM

RockLee9915 on (Chapter: 5)
RockLee9915what?!? my presious lee?...
me: LEE!!
lee: what?!?
me: hi!
lee: *sigh* i thought u were mad at me...
me: u have no idea..
lee: thank-WHAT?!?

SonicDX1995 on May 16, 2007, 8:38:08 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 5)
SonicDX1995yay you commented ^_^ :D

super_sonic2000 on May 16, 2007, 5:39:20 AM

super_sonic2000 on (Chapter: 35)
super_sonic2000roflol. time to introduce my naruto char to you.

Hitashi: Really? Does Garra really sing? I mean come on. what happend to the murderous garra?

Me: sorry about him hes a little jumpy ever that dragon got sealed in him! did I mention the the dragon is just as powerful as ninetails?

SonicDX1995 on May 16, 2007, 5:42:36 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 35)
SonicDX1995me:hi..and I think gaara isn't mean anymore cause he has funny friends and that

super_sonic2000 on May 16, 2007, 5:33:48 AM

super_sonic2000 on (Chapter: index)
super_sonic2000whew this will take a looooooooog time. this story is about as long as a dragon story will be.

wolf-girl-ghost on May 15, 2007, 4:54:57 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 35)
wolf-girl-ghostlol!!! yay i sang glamarous!lol gaara's song!!!

SonicDX1995 on May 16, 2007, 5:14:27 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 35)
SonicDX1995I love glamorouse..and gaara's song did make me laugh so did mine and shikamarus

KidRaccoon on May 15, 2007, 10:08:41 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 35)
KidRaccoonI'LL F&%$IN' KILL YOU JACK!!!!!!!
I'LL F&%$IN' KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!
BROTHER MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!

SonicDX1995 on May 16, 2007, 5:13:12 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 35)
SonicDX1995yeah..mr no like bro's..

KidRaccoon on May 16, 2007, 5:48:41 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonBrother killed mom, dad, lyle, matthew, and probably a lot of other people, too.
Brother always looked out for me, never let anybody hurt little sister Jackie, but even though he was the world's best brother, he was the world's worst guy.

SonicDX1995 on May 17, 2007, 10:55:22 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995omg D:

KidRaccoon on May 17, 2007, 11:23:10 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonJack:

1: Is a loving brother ^^
2: Is a psycopath O.o
3: Is an emo :(
4: Wants to be a happy family again TT_TT

Lordfury on May 15, 2007, 7:14:14 PM

Lordfury on (Chapter: index)
Lordfuryneed to kill

KidRaccoon on May 14, 2007, 6:56:58 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 34)
KidRaccoonMath sucks. :(

SonicDX1995 on May 14, 2007, 8:57:55 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 34)
SonicDX1995me love math

KidRaccoon on May 14, 2007, 9:08:34 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonI'm not bad at math, I just find it boring.
But that's okay. :)

SonicDX1995 on May 15, 2007, 9:06:20 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995math isn't boring when you have Mr.Mac

KidRaccoon on May 15, 2007, 10:10:52 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonI don't get Mr. Mac.
I get Mr. MacCarthy, he's the gym teacher.
He gives me candy cause I'm good in class. :)

SonicDX1995 on May 16, 2007, 5:13:51 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995oh..you have to go to oak veiw middle school to get mr.mac

PunkWolfGirl on May 14, 2007, 6:24:57 AM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 34)
PunkWolfGirl:DDDDDDDD Yay

SonicDX1995 on May 14, 2007, 6:33:09 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 34)
SonicDX1995polly voo france

wolf-girl-ghost on May 14, 2007, 6:08:10 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 34)
wolf-girl-ghostlol u like saying 6-5=1

SonicDX1995 on May 14, 2007, 6:32:55 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 34)
SonicDX1995yup XD

KidRaccoon on May 10, 2007, 9:31:05 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 33)
KidRaccoonWAFFLES FO YOOOOOOOOOUUU!!!!!
AND LOLLYPOPS FO YOOOOOOOOOUUU!!!!!^^

PunkWolfGirl on May 10, 2007, 6:40:25 AM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 33)
PunkWolfGirlxDDD FUNNEH! :DDD

DragonGirl1136 on May 9, 2007, 8:02:31 AM

DragonGirl1136 on (Chapter: 32)
DragonGirl1136Me: *grabs Shikamaru* Who are you and what have you done to Shikamaru?!

SonicDX1995 on May 9, 2007, 8:49:13 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 32)
SonicDX1995o.O millitary

PunkWolfGirl on May 9, 2007, 2:36:12 AM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 32)
PunkWolfGirlLOL! xDDDD

virusthehedgehog on May 8, 2007, 11:30:37 PM

virusthehedgehog on (Chapter: 4)
virusthehedgehogmuahahahahahahahaha garra suck @$$ in this it's awesum just the opposite of the real him LOL

DragonGirl1136 on May 8, 2007, 9:25:39 AM

DragonGirl1136 on (Chapter: 31)
DragonGirl1136Me: Yay for red clouds! Lollipop lolli? Pop pop lolli.

Kisame: What are you doing?

Me: Lolli lolli pop.

Kisame: WHAT?!

Me: *sigh* I'm speaking in the Lollipop language!

Lordfury on May 6, 2007, 6:49:40 PM

Lordfury on (Chapter: index)
Lordfurycome on next chapter let me kill

Lordfury on May 5, 2007, 11:59:37 AM

Lordfury on (Chapter: 29)
LordfuryThen who can i kill

SonicDX1995 on May 5, 2007, 12:18:13 PM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 29)
SonicDX1995Ino..^^,ororchimaru and gai

KidRaccoon on May 5, 2007, 11:47:50 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: 29)
KidRaccoonYeah! ^^

Lordfury on May 4, 2007, 5:45:31 PM

Lordfury on (Chapter: 28)
LordfuryGood work on this chapter i want to kill rock lee in the next one please 

PunkWolfGirl on May 4, 2007, 8:07:01 AM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 28)
PunkWolfGirlLMAO!!! YEAH GAARA YOU BITE SASORI! -Gives Gaara Lollypops- ^^

Lordfury on May 3, 2007, 6:53:05 PM

Lordfury on (Chapter: index)
LordfuryHay stop disrespecting my bro he does not hate spiders

SonicDX1995 on May 4, 2007, 5:17:53 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995pop lolly pop...

KidRaccoon on May 3, 2007, 10:33:37 AM

KidRaccoon on (Chapter: index)
KidRaccoonLOL! I have no idea what I just read, but I really like it.
Can you add me and Kabuto? X3

SonicDX1995 on May 3, 2007, 10:42:33 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995sure

DragonGirl1136 on May 3, 2007, 10:24:47 AM

DragonGirl1136 on (Chapter: 27)
DragonGirl1136Lawl. Beware, Gaara, for tomorrow morning, you will wake up breathing thru a tube.

I have an idea! How about Gaara runs into a wall (stupid baka!) and loses his memory! That would be funny!

SonicDX1995 on May 3, 2007, 10:42:21 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 27)
SonicDX1995D: noes!!!

DragonGirl1136 on May 3, 2007, 10:03:01 AM

DragonGirl1136 on (Chapter: 5)
DragonGirl1136AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUGH! NOOOOO! DIE, GAARA, DIE! *hits Gaara over the head repeatedly with a large plastic spoon*

Gaara: Owwww....

Me: Hmph! C'mon, Lee-kun! *drags Lee along by his arm*

DragonGirl1136 on May 3, 2007, 10:00:46 AM

DragonGirl1136 on (Chapter: index)
DragonGirl1136HEYS! Will you put me in here with Kisame-kun? YAYS! *hugs you*

Kouni46892742 on May 2, 2007, 6:35:44 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 25)
Kouni46892742...YES! NO ONE HAS ASKED ME YET!! YES!!!

PunkWolfGirl on May 1, 2007, 5:26:40 PM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 25)
PunkWolfGirlLmao!!! xDDD Zetsu Is Obsessed With Sun Flowers!! HAHAH! xD

SonicDX1995 on May 2, 2007, 5:09:13 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 25)
SonicDX1995what was your name again

wolf-girl-ghost on May 1, 2007, 5:25:38 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 25)
wolf-girl-ghostlol!!!!!!!!!! sasori likes pennies coz their shiny

Irken_Akire on April 30, 2007, 6:59:49 AM

Irken_Akire on (Chapter: 24)
Irken_AkireXD Sweet!!! :P Yeah....do u have a snake. Dont let her eat my birds! XD

tayloralisa on April 29, 2007, 9:40:48 AM

tayloralisa on (Chapter: index)
tayloralisaOh! Can my OC B in it? Her name's UL(just UL). She's nice so..

tayloralisa on April 29, 2007, 9:39:05 AM

tayloralisa on (Chapter: 4)
tayloralisaXD

tayloralisa on April 29, 2007, 9:36:42 AM

tayloralisa on (Chapter: 3)
tayloralisaXD *laughs really hard* Gaara's a chicken.^-^

tayloralisa on April 29, 2007, 9:34:36 AM

tayloralisa on (Chapter: 2)
tayloralisaLOL!!!!^_^

wolf-girl-ghost on April 28, 2007, 7:49:04 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 23)
wolf-girl-ghostyaty zetsu didn't eat me!and WOOOO YAOI!!!!!!!!!!!!

wolf-girl-ghost on April 28, 2007, 8:59:58 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 22)
wolf-girl-ghostyay truth or dare!!!!!!

PunkWolfGirl on April 25, 2007, 5:29:59 PM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 20)
PunkWolfGirlSHIKAMARU!!! -Does The I Love Shikamaru Dance- xDDD YAY! Can I Be In The Story? xP

PunkWolfGirl on April 27, 2007, 10:53:26 PM

PunkWolfGirl on (Chapter: 20)
PunkWolfGirlIts Kadie ^^

SonicDX1995 on April 27, 2007, 7:18:28 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 20)
SonicDX1995ok whats your name^-^

wolf-girl-ghost on April 27, 2007, 7:21:39 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 21)
wolf-girl-ghostWEEE SLEEP OVER!!!!!!

Irken_Akire on April 26, 2007, 6:06:48 AM

Irken_Akire on (Chapter: 20)
Irken_AkireXD Thats what u and shikamaru share....tired-ness. XD

wolf-girl-ghost on April 23, 2007, 7:25:38 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 18)
wolf-girl-ghostum gaara can't sleep, he's got insomia...

SonicDX1995 on April 25, 2007, 6:52:32 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 18)
SonicDX1995well in this story he can haha

jordanthehedgehog on April 23, 2007, 7:42:23 AM

jordanthehedgehog on (Chapter: 18)
jordanthehedgehogLOL funny brilliant chapter keep it up i will stay awaqy from u in future since u kill people

wolf-girl-ghost on April 23, 2007, 7:15:18 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 16)
wolf-girl-ghostlol power of fruit loops

wolf-girl-ghost on April 23, 2007, 7:14:36 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 17)
wolf-girl-ghostyay he ate lee!I wuv plants!!!

FlameTheFox578 on April 22, 2007, 9:58:57 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: index)
FlameTheFox578Boooooooooooooooooooo

FlameTheFox578 on April 22, 2007, 9:58:46 AM

FlameTheFox578 on (Chapter: 14)
FlameTheFox578boooooooooooo

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:46:16 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 16)
Hyperstar90Congrats nara and yay for lollypops

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:45:01 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 15)
Hyperstar90YAY the lollypops returned horay all is right with the world

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:44:14 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 14)
Hyperstar90WAAAA the lollypops have gone
go kick that dudes @$$

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:42:04 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 12)
Hyperstar90Me: XD thats a good move ill keep that i mind the next time my sis fights wiv me
Jack: hey thats not fair its a mean thing to do
Me:*throws a spider on jacks face*
Jack: AHHHHHH!!!!

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:40:04 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 11)
Hyperstar90I like fights i put £20 on you ^^

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:38:52 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 10)
Hyperstar90*falls over and dies but not before sayin*
WEEEEEE FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!!!!

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:37:07 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 9)
Hyperstar90*me and jack do a happy dance*
ME: Yay!!!
Jack: weeee!!!!
ME: i like ice cream too
Jack: i like waffles with ice cream on em
ME: O_o

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:35:30 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 8)
Hyperstar90Bah i hate exams all types of em but thats cos im an idiot
cool NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:33:42 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 7)
Hyperstar90cool yay kiiling i want to kill people too.....wait that sounded bad didnt it O_O

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:32:10 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 6)
Hyperstar90ME: this rules WEEEEEEEEEE lolly pops, ice cream and spagetti now im hungary.....
Jack: *sigh* i want to die
ME: ow dont die otherwise you dont get to read the story
Jack: yeah that is a good reason to stay alive ^^

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:28:56 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 5)
Hyperstar90ME:COTTON CANDY!!!!!
Jackspicer:cotton candy where
ME: *hits him over head* its not for you dumbass.....ahem sos Great now next chapter
Jackspicer:oww

HS90 wants cotton candy RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:26:18 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 4)
Hyperstar90Hoooray!!!! X3

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:22:25 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 3)
Hyperstar90X3 hes a scardy cat to the max not even i am scared of butterflys

Hyperstar90 on April 21, 2007, 11:18:51 PM

Hyperstar90 on (Chapter: 2)
Hyperstar90XD spiders scare me too

Irken_Akire on April 21, 2007, 11:52:37 AM

Irken_Akire on (Chapter: index)
Irken_AkireMauahahaha! Sasuke lost! XD Nice....I love the part when u and Shikamaru fights! NEAH!

SonicDX1995 on April 21, 2007, 10:27:20 PM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995hehe me to me and my bro fight^-&

Kouni46892742 on April 21, 2007, 10:09:31 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742Who am i gonna fight!?

SonicDX1995 on April 21, 2007, 7:18:06 PM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995your next

wolf-girl-ghost on April 21, 2007, 10:02:40 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 15)
wolf-girl-ghostlollypop!!!!!!!

wolf-girl-ghost on April 21, 2007, 10:01:47 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 13)
wolf-girl-ghostomg i wanted to fight sasuke lol, i'll have a realastionship wiv him instead of gaara

Saluki on April 21, 2007, 8:09:51 AM

Saluki on (Chapter: 14)
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SonicDX1995 on April 21, 2007, 8:15:50 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 14)
SonicDX1995yah!!

Saluki on April 21, 2007, 7:48:52 AM

Saluki on (Chapter: 13)
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SonicDX1995 on April 21, 2007, 7:59:12 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 13)
SonicDX1995sauske:LOLLYPOPS!!

Irken_Akire on April 21, 2007, 5:57:22 AM

Irken_Akire on (Chapter: index)
Irken_AkireWEEEEH! U woN! *thumbs up* XD U is really funneh! My sister is scared of bugs just like Gaara...and shes 19! *goes insane* Nice job!

wolf-girl-ghost on April 20, 2007, 9:01:03 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 10)
wolf-girl-ghostKILL LEE!!!!!

wolf-girl-ghost on April 20, 2007, 8:58:58 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 8)
wolf-girl-ghostyay chunnin exams!

wolf-girl-ghost on April 20, 2007, 7:47:17 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 7)
wolf-girl-ghostenjoy your killing^^

wolf-girl-ghost on April 18, 2007, 7:53:37 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 4)
wolf-girl-ghostum my name is milli, or are youy using mine and nara's surnames?and yay u took my shino idea!

Kouni46892742 on April 18, 2007, 12:48:24 PM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 4)
Kouni46892742um....and my names not Namida either....its Nara

wolf-girl-ghost on April 18, 2007, 8:21:09 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 5)
wolf-girl-ghostHOW DARE YOU LEE!?Lol jk i luff leexgaara and this fic!

sonicbabe5 on April 18, 2007, 7:49:11 AM

sonicbabe5 on (Chapter: 3)
sonicbabe5lol^^ gaara is afarid off every bug!

sonicbabe5 on April 18, 2007, 7:48:19 AM

sonicbabe5 on (Chapter: 2)
sonicbabe5llol^^ go kankuro!!!

wolf-girl-ghost on April 18, 2007, 7:46:20 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 3)
wolf-girl-ghostlmao if gaara is scared of insects let him meet shino!

sonicbabe5 on April 18, 2007, 7:32:26 AM

sonicbabe5 on (Chapter: 1)
sonicbabe5I wanna b in it with kakuro1!!!!

SonicDX1995 on April 18, 2007, 7:38:45 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 1)
SonicDX1995yup

wolf-girl-ghost on April 18, 2007, 7:38:36 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 2)
wolf-girl-ghostlmao gaara is screaming at a spider i laughed so much within the time i read this, can;t wait for next chappie^^

Kouni46892742 on April 18, 2007, 7:35:44 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742OOhhh....can i join please with Kiba-kun....(rock lee if kibas taken)

SonicDX1995 on April 18, 2007, 7:38:20 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: index)
SonicDX1995yah^-^ whats your characters namr

Kouni46892742 on April 18, 2007, 7:40:25 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742Um...I'll just give you her bio
 
Name: Nara Namida

Age: 13 ½

Birthday: July 19

Gender: Demon/ Human female

Hair Color: Brown with Blond Highlights; Long, normally braided 

Eyes: Amber-Gold 

Clothing: Teal kimono top, torn jeans, dark blue zori, headband around neck (she wears it like Sakura during battle) 

Kekkei Genkai: Water and Wind Manipulation 

Distinguishing Features: Orochimaru’s Curse mark 

Demon: 6-tailed arctic wolf (Hokkoyoku-kami)

Village: Village of the Snow

Family: Father/ Murdered by Itachi
Mother/ Murdered by Itachi
Younger Brother Makoto/ Murdered by Itachi

FRIENDS: Kiba (has a big crush on him) Hinata

Nara Namida is a shy young chunin from the Village of the Snow. She was born with a health condition that gives her a weak immune system. It is only harmful if she catches a bad virus; otherwise it just gives her the occasional cough. She stutters a lot when she talks. Her past taught her to trust no one and to accept help from no one, so if anyone she doesn’t know or is afraid of approaches her, or if anyone tries to help her, she will lash out on them. However, if anyone she cares for is in danger, she will risk her life to save them, even if it means letting the demon inside her take control. Her demon can only come out if A) Her curse mark strongly reacting or B) through strong emotions (mainly sadness and anger). She gets really grumpy and depressed on July 18, since that was the day her family was killed, and the day a year after that she received the curse mark. She lives in a small hotel with her dog Momo.

wolf-girl-ghost on April 18, 2007, 7:32:35 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostI'll give u her bio:
Name:Milli Canial
Age:12
Clan:Canial/hyuuga
Demon:Ninetailed wolf
Family:Half brother-Naruto
half cousins-hinata, neji anyone else hyuuga
-rest of family killed by my demon-
Crush:Sabaku No Gaara
Pets:Fox cub named "Kitty"
Teammates:Razor Enforcer,Phoenix Enforcer
Other Info:Milli's childhood was very bad, just as bad as Gaara's,when she was born the 9 tailed wolf demon was sealed in her, it killed her clan before it could be sealed and Naruto's father took custody of her, but then got killed.She was a outcast and everyone saw her as a monster and never acknowlodged her.When she was 6 she couldn't take it anymore and her demon was unleashed destroying her village.After it was destroyed the hokage managed to seal it back in her before dieing.When it was sealed back in her and she calmed down she was taken to konoha and lived with Naruto.On the way she recused a fox cub and kept it as her pet and named it "Kitty" and it began her companion.

wolf-girl-ghost on April 18, 2007, 7:30:11 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostfankies^^

wolf-girl-ghost on April 18, 2007, 7:27:08 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 1)
wolf-girl-ghostohh ohh can my charrie be in it wiv gaara-kun pleeeeeeeease!?

SonicDX1995 on April 18, 2007, 7:30:08 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 1)
SonicDX1995oh whats her name

SonicDX1995 on April 18, 2007, 7:29:31 AM

SonicDX1995 on (Chapter: 1)
SonicDX1995ok ~_^