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Sun and Moon-The Lunar Twins

A Student choice piece started at my school. I thought i'd post it and continue it here at FAC! It's kinda like, Harry Potter meets Superheroes! Hoot!

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Chapter 1 - The Birth of Hereos
Submitted: April 9, 2007 • Updated: April 9, 2007
Word count: 1145 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 206

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power9x on June 16, 2007, 7:15:17 AM

power9x on (Chapter: 1)
power9xGreat job on the story! A bit anticlimatic, but anticlimatic for me is anything without a huge battle, internal or external. Though, great job on the description and flow, you've got the perfect balance between narrating all the time and a script. I've been finding a ton of writers here today, and I'd like it if you'd read my 6 fanfics here sometime. Well, bye.

Tron500 on July 6, 2007, 2:21:29 PM

Tron500 on (Chapter: 1)
Tron500Dont worry, battles shall come!
And sure I'll read ur stories!^^

twinsanity120 on July 3, 2007, 7:04:06 AM

twinsanity120 on (Chapter: 1)
twinsanity120neat story,i loved it,,*gives u a cookie*