Chapter 1 - You
Submitted January 6, 2007 Updated December 13, 2007 Status Incomplete | Poem i wrote when i was bored. and zuko's mom didn't die, i know that now..... but i wrote this in season two.... so i didn't know that... DON'T KILL ME!!!
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Chapter 1 - You
Chapter 1 - You
You banished me, and scarred my face.
You made ME the huge disgrace.
You took away my dignity, honor, and pride.
You make my anger flow out like the tide.
You disowned me, and you banished me,
You sent me away, you made me flee.
You gave the younger one so much power,
You make me tortured every hour.
You hate me like you hate the other.
You're the one that killed my mother!
You almost killed me when I was young,
You want all against you to be hung.
You say that she's born lucky,
And I'm lucky to be born.
I'll be forever haunted
By your cruelty and your scorn.
You have no control for violence,
All you care about is war.
And every time I talk to you,
I feel like I'm crashing through the floor.
You're inhumane and evil,
You're the one who makes me mad.
You're the one who put me in existance.
Yeah, that's right. You're my dad.
~From Zuko's point of view
You made ME the huge disgrace.
You took away my dignity, honor, and pride.
You make my anger flow out like the tide.
You disowned me, and you banished me,
You sent me away, you made me flee.
You gave the younger one so much power,
You make me tortured every hour.
You hate me like you hate the other.
You're the one that killed my mother!
You almost killed me when I was young,
You want all against you to be hung.
You say that she's born lucky,
And I'm lucky to be born.
I'll be forever haunted
By your cruelty and your scorn.
You have no control for violence,
All you care about is war.
And every time I talk to you,
I feel like I'm crashing through the floor.
You're inhumane and evil,
You're the one who makes me mad.
You're the one who put me in existance.
Yeah, that's right. You're my dad.
~From Zuko's point of view
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Falconlobo on December 13, 2007, 2:15:34 AM
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wow nice wording great poemkabuki2kira on February 27, 2007, 8:02:06 AM
kabuki2kira on
Really nice, I like it. I'm writing zuko poems too.AvatarFan24 on February 23, 2007, 8:57:54 PM
AvatarFan24 on
thats really good!!!! i like how you showed his feelings.waterbender00 on February 9, 2007, 9:54:29 AM
Nice you really captured his emotion. *favs* (rly)