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Chapter 21 - I don't like this...

just a sonic the hedgehog story 7 yeres later in time that means every chara is 7 yeres older hehe. it needs no more description than this i think.

Chapter 21 - I don't like this...

Chapter 21 - I don't like this...
(taaaaaaaaadaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! new chappy!! this chapter is written by my friends here in england,so it might not remind you of my chapters. but I realy hope you like it)

Raven: *looks at Shadow*

Shadow: What is your problem?! *looks at Raven*

Raven: YOU! You is the problem!

Shadow: are you talking to your self?!

Raven: No! I'm talking to you!

Onyx: SHUT UP!!

Raven and Shadow: *quiet*

Onyx: thank you...

Sutaru: where ar we going? my feet hurt...

Thunder: we are going to find Mephiles i guess...

Raven: Mephiles you said?

Thuner:...yeah..*looks at Raven*

Raven: oooooook...*cellphone starts making a beeping sound*

Thuner: what was that?

Raven: just my cellphone...*picks it up and looks at the screen* oh...sorry, inportant stuff to do...I have to go...*runs off*

Sutaru: I think something is going on...and i don't like it...

Onyx: I agree...I'll go look after Raven.

Sutaru: I'll come whit you.

Kainou: be careful you two...

Sutaru and Onyx: we will.

Shadow: *hugs Onyx* be back soon.

Thunder: *hugs Sutaru* I agree whit Shadow...come back as soon as possible.

Sutaru and Onyx: *hugs them* we promis. *stops huging them and runs after Raven*

Kyle: THAT was stupid...

Magneto and speedy: I agree....

Mercury: I'll go whit them...*looks at Anique*

Anique: ok.

Mercury: *looks at Anique and smiles*

Anique: What? *looks at Mercury*

Mercury: aren't I'm going to have a hug too?

Anique: not from me...

Mercury: then i won't go...*sits down*

Anique: *sighs*

Tails: I guess we just have to wait.

Armi: yeah...

Lorane: *lies down* tell me when they are back....

Flamie: Sure.

Tulpi: now what?

Scamp (Amy noticed you spell it like this now): I don't know...*picks up a rock*

Tulpi:*hugs Scamp*

Scamp: why are you hugging me?

Tulpi: I don't know...

Scamps: *sighs*

(back to Sutaru and Onyx)

Sutaru: *hears a voice* some one is here...

Onyx: *hears the voice too* i can hear it...but who is it?

Sutaru: I know who it is...*hides behind a tree and looks at the person* It's Mephiles...and he is talking to some one...

Onyx: I wonder who..

Sutaru: *looks at the other person* No...way...it can't be...

Onyx: what? I want to see. *looks at the person* WHAT TH...

Sutaru: *puts hr hand over Onyx mouth* sssssh! are you going to let them find out we are here?

Onyx: *pushes Sutaru's hand away* no...but i just can't beleve it...

Sutaru: we have to go i guess...before they sees us...

Mehpiles: To late girls...

Robots: *grabs Sutaru and Onyx*

Onyx: GT OFF!!

Sutaru: NOT AGAIN!! THIS IS LIKE THE FORTH TIME!

Mephiles: *looks at Sutaru and Onyx* are you coming to join me?

Sutaru: No...i won't make that mistake again...

Onyx: You can forget that.

Mephiles: as you wish then. good spying Raven.

Raven: *walks to them* Thank you.

Onyx: *looks at Raven* How could you?! I tought you were our friend!

Raven: But i'm not. the bad side is better...

Sutaru: we trusted you! and now you are on Mephiles side!

Raven: that comed from the right person...

Mephiles: Raven joined me, because you left.

Raven: Some one had to be his new spy. *laughs a little*

Mephiles: my robots, can you please escort the ladys to our little guest room?

Roots: *walks away whit Sutaru and Onyx*

Onyx: Just greate...

Sutaru: This sucks!

Onyx: This is my fault...i shouldn't have yelled...

Sutaru: It's ok...

Onyx: realy?

Sutaru: yeah...

Onyx: thanks....

Robots: *opens a door to a room and trows in Sutaru and Onyx and looks th door*

Onyx: OPEN THE DOOR!!

Sutaru: YOU FREAKS!! LET US OUT!

Robots: *Walks away*

(back to the others)

Sonic: where are they?

Thuner: they should have been back by now...

Shadow: I'm starting to get worried...

Raven: Hiya guys. *walks thowards them*

Shadow: WHERE IS ONYX?!

Thunder: AND Sutaru!

Raven: I don't know...i tought they were whit you...

Shadow and Thunder: DAMNIT!!

Kainou: Maybe Mephiles has them.

Raven: Sure he haven't. I'm sure they are just...taking a long way back.

Sonic: Maybe...

Knuckles: I still don't realy trust you...

Cream: I don't eather...

Armi: So don't i...

Raven: *starts walkning again*...are you coming? there is a long way left to go...

Shadow: But....

Raven: They will come after us...

Shadow: ok...*starts walking*

Raven: *Thinks* just a bunch of fools...this was easier than i tought it would be...

(that was all...see ya in the next chapter!!!)

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LoveWolves on August 16, 2007, 7:32:14 PM

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LoveWolvesCool ^^ more :DDD

Anikue123 on May 16, 2007, 1:48:13 AM

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Anikue123yay XD

Onyxina on May 15, 2007, 5:03:14 AM

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OnyxinaYAY xD Raven is Evil >:3 They treatened him with Chocolate chip cookies xD And a Kadaj Suit and Katanas xD great work Make mooore >:3

Sutaru on May 14, 2007, 6:01:02 AM

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Sutaruawesome!! Make more soon!