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Chapter 2 - Romantic Date

It a love story about Zane and Victoria fall in love.

Chapter 2 - Romantic Date

Chapter 2 - Romantic Date




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One night at 7:00 pm..[br]
She put on her dress on and Zane went and knock her door and holding roses and she open the door and "Hey Zane" Victoria said. "Hey Victoria you look loving" Zane smiled. "Thank you" Victoria said. "Oh these roses are for you my love" Zane said. "For me awww how sweet and I'm going to put it on the vast" Victoria said. "You do that" Zane said. "I'm ready and so what you wanna take me?" Victoria asked. "Um I don't know" Zane said. "Oh can we go for dinner cause I'm hungry?" Victoria asked. "Sure thing" Zane smiled. "Yay" Victoria cheer. He take to the romantic dinner in the restaurnant. "May I help you?" The waiter asked. "Yes 2 please" Zane said. "Okay follow me" waiter said. They follow him and they sit on the chair on the table and give them menu. "Do you want anything to drink?" Waiter asked. "Yes I want ice tea please" Zane said. "Oh I want a soda please?" Victoria said. "Alright be right back" The waiter said. He went right back and come back. "Here you go" waiter said. "Thanks" Zane said. "Thank you" Victoria said. "May I take your order?" Waiter said. "Yes I want a salad please and chicken fingers" Zane said. "Oh I want what he having I want chicken fingers and french fries" Victoria said. "Oh okay and the food will be here at the moment" Waiter said. He left. Zane was smiling at Victoria. "Um Zane what you smiling at?" Victoria asked. "You" Zane said. "Why?" Victoria said. "Cause I think you're cute" Zane said. Victoria staring to blushed. Than the waiter come back with the food. "Here you go" Waiter said. "Thank you" Zane said. "Thanks" Victoria said. He left and they eat. "Yum that taste good isn't Zane" Victoria said. "Yeah it is" Zane said. They eating their foods. "I'm done" Victoria said. "Me too" Zane said. They both starting laughing. "Hey wanna go to the park?" Victoria said. "Sure" Zane said. "Excuse me sir you forgot your check" Waiter said. "Oh yeah right" Zane said. He pay for it and they left the restaurnant.[br]
They goes to the park and have a romantic moment together. "Aww it nice here isn't Zane" Victoria said. "Yeah it is" Zane said. They sit on the bench. "I love you Zane" Victoria said. "I love you too Victoria" Zane said. He start kisses her on the lips and she starting to blushed. They kisses for a hour and they stop. "Hey I wanna go home now" Victoria said. "Oh okay" Zane said. They goes back to the duel academy and take her to her room. "I have a great night" Victoria said. "Me too" Zane said. Victoria smiles and Zane smiled back and he kiss her and she start to blushes and he goes to his room. She put on her night clothes and goes to bed and turn off the light and goes to sleep.[br]
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Airo on July 9, 2010, 4:11:37 PM

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AiroCute story, but I feel like you're pushing them too much/fast. Why not let their love slowly grow instead of instantly "hitting it off"?

VictoriaZepeda on July 12, 2010, 12:42:39 AM

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VictoriaZepedaOh I see but I think I need to fix it a little