Frindle

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: July 4, 2006 • Updated: July 4, 2006
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hakkohu on July 6, 2006, 11:21:43 AM

hakkohu on July 6, 2006, 11:21:43 AM (Chapter: 1)

Much better, it's more descriptive than before. I like it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Really this is awesome.
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Kittyduck on July 4, 2006, 12:24:44 AM

Kittyduck on July 4, 2006, 12:24:44 AM (Chapter: 1)

Much better. ^^ Now the description provides material for people to imagine what the setting and characters are like. Hope to see the next chapter!

By the way, why'd you change you're account?