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Chapter 4 - zeke flyhieght(me)

hey i love writing poems so here they go ^__^

Chapter 4 - zeke flyhieght(me)

Chapter 4 - zeke flyhieght(me)
i sleep in silence
dreaming of that horror
it haunts me
ever on i cant get it out
out of my head it haunts me
ever on i will remember
how it happened

father i hear my self scream
father i cried
i will always remember
the first time
i called him...father!

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yusuke_luv_gurl on March 20, 2004, 12:33:54 AM

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yusuke_luv_gurli feel so sorry for you. you can share my daddy. ^_^; i hope that was the right thing to say... anyways, the poem's really good and it's very dark. YAY FOR DARK POEMS!!! YAY!!!!!

coca-cola on March 9, 2004, 12:15:23 PM

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coca-colahay my dad wasn't there for me as well get this my mom thought it would be a good idea to not let me vist him and well he died 14 years ago damn it was that long ago i must have lost track of time *slitly smiles*

sweetblood on March 6, 2004, 7:39:56 AM

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sweetbloodAwww I'm so sozzy! My dad died too and i can relate to your poem

Zeke_hieis_girl on February 22, 2004, 3:54:45 AM

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Zeke_hieis_girlthankies chibi your comments mean alot to me ^__^

chibi_people on February 21, 2004, 10:17:44 AM

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chibi_people**cries** how sad ;_;

Zeke_hieis_girl on February 18, 2004, 10:02:04 AM

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Zeke_hieis_girlokies first thing to point out my father died right in front of me i watched.....and another thing my father is koronue you may know him you may not i always called him koronue cause i could call him fathe rhe wasnt fit for the part or was but didnt do what he was supposed to he wasnt there for me.......