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Chapter 7 - a kurama poem for dustbunny

hey i love writing poems so here they go ^__^

Chapter 7 - a kurama poem for dustbunny

Chapter 7 - a kurama poem for dustbunny
this poem is for Dustbunny! i am repaying her kindness with a poem!!!!
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KURAMA (revised)


every one on the streets watches
they all stare as he walks by
a pretty face with meloncholy eyes

he looks at them and his expression changes
a perfect smile with a look of no regret
although deep inside there is much he did wrong

an icy glare is within
there is nothing he can change
all that is done cannot be reversed

a thief he once was
the best of them all they would say
he was proud of it too

his love for her is like nothing he has
its prize cannot be topped not even the treasures he once had
nothing will replace it now or ever
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well thats what i got hope you like it Dustbunny ^__^

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dustbunny on April 17, 2004, 6:08:51 AM

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dustbunnyI love this poem it's one of the best Kurama poems that i have ever read. GREAT JOB!!

yusuke_luv_gurl on March 20, 2004, 12:42:03 AM

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yusuke_luv_gurlthat's really good! *does first comment dance* can you maybe write another yusuke poem, but for me? please? ;_; thankies! ^_^