Username   Password  
Remember   Register   |   Forgot your password?

Chapter 1 - Untitled

this is a random creative writing story we had to write for english class. i added a couple of the lines my friends Bo and Sonmin wrote in there. its actually really bad but i find it funny, in a not so funny way. =3

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled
the sky was turning red and the waves were going up and down like granpa's last breaths.
i found myself at my favourite pace and i smile at the welcoming sounds of the ocean.
i could see the trees dancing wildly in the wind. Then suddenly the sun was nowhere
to be found and the moon was floating almost lasily in the sky.One by one the people left
the beach, leaving me alone with only the moon to keep me company.The silver bracelet shone
brightly in the early evening sky.I walked past singing flowers reaching their fingers
towards the violet clouds.It felt good to get my shoes off and sink my feet into the gold
dust.I closed my eyes and let my hair dance. The crickets were singing their mellowdramatic
song of sorrow and depression. the waves reach their hands out and dampen my feet.I watched
the purple sky turn navy. The air smelt salty and filled with the sound of a Morpork.
i smiled and spent the night sleeping on the sof sand, allowing the sea to take me into her
arms, and then i drowned.

Comments

Comments (5)

You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on May 15, 2005, 3:45:40 PM

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on
WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2oi, dis ain't crap!! it's awesomne and u shouldn't put ya self down!! i like it!

JHanna on May 9, 2005, 9:23:30 AM

JHanna on
JHannaCrap???? Ur great!!!!! Like the end! I'm odd, I know... ^^´´´

bek-ee on April 27, 2005, 7:57:41 PM

bek-ee on
bek-eeDear anyone who reads this. its actually crap! so don't laugh at me, i mainly put it up to humor myself as i do not have a scanner so unable to put pictures up. sorry if i affended your brains by putting this sorry excuse for a story up.

bek-ee on April 27, 2005, 9:21:36 AM

bek-ee on
bek-eei thought it was funny coz i just died at the end but its not really funny at all. i'm just lame ^.^;
thanks for your comment!

AngelKite on April 26, 2005, 10:32:12 PM

AngelKite on
AngelKiteNice use of vocabulary!Very wide!(wider than mine)
I like it,though I don't really see why it is funny.Please tell me.Thanks!
*adds you to fav author*
Write more!!!*^-^*