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Chapter 1 - And Then There Were Ten

What if Ben never found the Omnitrix,what if it never landed in Ben's part of the cartoon world.

What if...it landed in the Foster's backyard?

Chapter 1 - And Then There Were Ten

Chapter 1 - And Then There Were Ten

And Then There Were Ten.

It was the end of adopt-a-thaught Saturday,Goo had not gone home yet.

Mac and Goo were watching stars outside.

"Look,Mac!A sooting star!"said Goo.

"Make a wish,Goo."

Suddenly the star flew straight at them.

"Look out!"yelled Mac.

The star fell into the yard.

It burned a hole in the branches of the pine tree.

The two walked slowly to it.

They saw that it was a pod.

Goo touched it then jumped back.

Nothing happend.

Mac touched it next.

The pod opened.

Mac reached for it.

A black mass jumped out at Mac.

"Help it's gonna eat my brain!"yelled Mac."

Hey look a button!maybe its a phone."said Goo.

Mac looked at his wrist,pushed the button and the ring popped up.

"Look,some kind of fire guy.Push it down and call him!"

Mac pushed it down.

He transformed into some sort of fire monster!

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ginathehedgehog on December 6, 2007, 2:27:26 AM

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ginathehedgehogWow, cool!

Gee on November 14, 2007, 1:10:32 AM

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GeeYeah, awesome idea to mix the two best cartoons in the world!
I had that idea before, but then I though I'm not up to the challenge.;D
I wonder, what kind of dangers Mac will have to face.
Hey, the omnitrix can absorb an imaginary friend's DNA?;D

cactar on November 16, 2007, 10:06:44 PM

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cactarHmm,maybe.

Chapters later!