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Chapter 2 - Don't Tell Anyone

What if Ben never found the Omnitrix,what if it never landed in Ben's part of the cartoon world.

What if...it landed in the Foster's backyard?

Chapter 2 - Don't Tell Anyone

Chapter 2 - Don't Tell Anyone

"AAAAAAAAHHHH!!"Mac was screaming as he was running around the backyard.

"Mac!Settle down!!!"yelled Goo.

Mac stopped running,stood up straight,and started panting.

"Wait a sec,It doesn't burn?"said Mac,puzzled.

"Mac,do you know what this means?!"Goo started.

"I'm a...a...superhero?!"stuttered Mac.

"Okay,okay,okay,um maybe you...um...OH! Try to shoot fire!"said Goo,suggesting a power.

"Here goes nothin'!"said Mac as he put his hand up.

A fire beam shot from his hand.

"Awesome."they both said.

MINUTES LATER...

"I don't want to be like this forever!"yelled Mac.

"Hmmm....maybe-"Goo said before being inturupted.

There were Five beeps and the symbol on Mac's chest glowing red with each one.

Then a huge red flash.

Out of the flash stepped Mac,in his normal form.

"Goo,I'm a...a...SUPERHERO!! WOOHOO!!!!"cheered Mac.

"HEY,WHO'S YELLING?!"yelled a voice from the window above them.

Goo and Mac looked up.

They saw Bloo leaning out the window.

 

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ginathehedgehog on December 6, 2007, 2:28:32 AM

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ginathehedgehogAwesome!

Gee on November 23, 2007, 10:47:11 PM

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GeeCool, nice chapter, look forward to read more.;D