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Chapter 6 - New Rival

What if Ben never found the Omnitrix,what if it never landed in Ben's part of the cartoon world.

What if...it landed in the Foster's backyard?

Chapter 6 - New Rival

Chapter 6 - New Rival

The lightning bolt came straight for Mac.

Mac screamed and put his hand in front of his face,forgeting about the Omnitrix.

Volts of electricity ran through his body,almost killing him.

Mac collapsed,but as he did the Omnitrix popped up and Mac fell on it.

One of his legs became motorized,his arm resembled a bear's.

His hair grew long and flowing,the symbol appeared on his viking helmet.

"Woah,who's this guy,looks like...the Bloo Superdude!"said Mac.

"What the?!"exclaimed Jamez surprized to see what happened.

Mac smiled.

His other hand went in to his arm,and out came a spiked Paddle ball.

He slammed it right into Jamez's face.

Jamez flew into the wall.

He didn't get up.

Had enough,Withazee?"said Mac,overconfident.

Jamez grabbed a power cord and suddenly turned into electricity.

He jumped into it.

He was on the T.V. screen above Mac.

An evil grin was on his face.

"I'll get you for this,Nerd,if it's the last thing I do!!"he yelled just before creating a power surge that wiped out the school.

 

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Gee on December 6, 2007, 12:28:39 AM

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GeeJamez seems pretty mad.;D Awesome chapter, can't wait for more.;D
I also wonder if Jamez will have some kind of a combined form?;D

cactar on December 6, 2007, 5:24:06 AM

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cactarthere's a reason for it,too later in the story.

ginathehedgehog on December 6, 2007, 2:32:17 AM

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ginathehedgehogNice chapter! SO Mac absorbed the Blue Superdude's DAN? Awesome!

cactar on December 6, 2007, 5:22:10 AM

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cactarya it's like super power bloo

ginathehedgehog on December 6, 2007, 5:24:08 AM

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ginathehedgehogYeah, from The "Blue Superdude And The Magic Potatoe Of Power"! That was one of my fave eps!