Chapter 1 - death
Submitted March 22, 2004 Updated April 13, 2004 Status Incomplete | i was bored in language today so i wrote this. comment. do not read if you have a weak concience.
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Chapter 1 - death
Chapter 1 - death
death. it takes you, toys with your mind. it comes closer, closer, tick tock tick tock. it breaths down your neck, wraps around you. over and over it tries to grab you, almost takes you, but never succeeds..............until the moment.
it takes you, never lets go, to darkness. there is nothing to help you. you get hot and sweat. you hear sounds that you cant imagine, screams so eerie you get chills. then there is light, light powerful enough to destroy the darkness. you are cleansed and free.
i was bored in language.
it takes you, never lets go, to darkness. there is nothing to help you. you get hot and sweat. you hear sounds that you cant imagine, screams so eerie you get chills. then there is light, light powerful enough to destroy the darkness. you are cleansed and free.
i was bored in language.
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demented_poet on February 7, 2005, 10:22:39 AM
Kool i cant right long stuff xD i can i just dont find the time toWolfAquarius on September 10, 2004, 12:57:41 PM
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try this. (i just wanna see if it works) *ehem* get a pocket watch and swing it bak an forth while saying that poem and i think youll put somebody.... you probly dont need the poket watch. i got in a trance just by reading it. i luv it *adds to faves*-W.A.
Dragon_Lord on August 12, 2004, 1:36:52 AM
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take a look at my poems, u may get ideas. i dont care if its on the same subject or if u use some of them, in fact id be honored.cmart009 on April 13, 2004, 10:07:55 AM
cmart009 on
ive got to get some more ideas! well i need to think really deep like i did when i wrote this.dare2try on April 12, 2004, 2:43:10 PM
dare2try on
lol thats wel good! I can neva rite short stuf, i envy ppl who can rite short stuf, my thingys hav 2 go on 4 at least 5 frigin paragraphs! lol ok il get 2 th point, this is realy good u shood rite mor!sweetblood on March 22, 2004, 11:20:05 AM
sweetblood on
wow that's so great it's inspiring to find such great writers. It's almost hypnotic the way it sounds