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Chapter 20 - Chapter 20

This is about the Naruto group going to Middle School they are in 8th grade so friends,school,drama,fun,and middle school romance.Comment please!

Chapter 20 - Chapter 20

Chapter 20 - Chapter 20
Disclaimer:I dont own Naruto or any of the other characters.

"Just so you Brats know Itachi and I have a room next to your rooms so don't get any ideas."James said as he got into the car

"Ok so we'll see you guys at the Inn."said Hinata

"Yeah,Believe it!"Naruto said as Itachi came up behind them

"Come on Rugrats,Rei is asleep in the car and we should to get to the hotel,and no do not believe it."Itachi said as he pushed the boys to his car and the girls got in James' car

Both cars drove to the hotel.

The cars got to the Inn the guys checked in carrying their bags and Itachi carrying Reiko.The girls got their minutes after the guys James checked them in as the girls gave the bell boys their shopping bags as the girls got out of the car.The girls went up to theri room,as did James.The girls had a room with a veiw of the ocean and a deck that looked out over the ocean.The guys had a room on the right side of the girls with Itachi and James' room between.Reiko had a room on the left side of the girls. The guys' room was pretty much the same they were both suites.Reiko's room was a regular room and James and Itachi's room was also a regular room only with two beds.


"Hey do you girlys wanna change into our jammys?"asked Ino

"Yeah!"said Sakura then we can play Truth or Dare!"said Sakura

"Oh yes its nothing without truth or dare!"said Tenten

"Actually I'm just going to go walk along the beach."said Hinata

"Wait Hinata,we're sneaking out later tonight after James goes to bed and going to this really cute bakery then to the beach to have a really early breakfast,so change into this."said Ino as she threw a shopping bad at her

"Ok...but should we really sneak out."said Hinata

"Yes it'll be fun its not like we're not going to sleep in anyway lets have some fun while we're here."said Sakura

"I'm with Hinata on this one,I really don't want to get in trouble or get kidnapped and have horrible things happen to me."said Tenten as she started getting nervous of what could happen to her,Hinata joined hr only starting to hyperventalate.

"Don't worry we will only go out for about a half and hour."said Ino

"So go change Hinata and if anyone asks your just taking a walk along the beach."said Sakura

"Ok I'll change but thats it."said Hinata

"Fine."said Ino as she gave Sakura a look saying 'oh we'll be sure to get Tenten and Hinata to go' Sakura nodded

Hinata changed into a white halter dress that was flowy from below her chest and down and it came down right below her knees with a pair of white high helled sandels that tied up.

"Wow Hinata,that looks amazing and very beachy but elegant."said Ino,Sakura and Tenten nodding their heads

"Well I'm off."she said then Sakura came up to her and put a white ribbon in her hair as a headband,then Hinata walked out to the beach

"Lets change into pjs,then order room service."said Ino

"Pig we should also pick out our outfits for the coffe shop and Tenten's so she doesn't throw a fit."whispered Sakura

"Right Forehead,Ten would you go down to the kitchen and order us room service."said Ino

"Why do I have to go down?"asked Tenten

"Because its fresher if you do it in person,please."said Sakura

"Whatever,you two are so wierd."said Tenten as she left in her pjs they were green boxers and a light green cami

"Ok good shes gone lets pick out her outfit first."said Ino as they picked out for Tenten a tube dress with a green flower pattern and a pair of green and white wedges

They picked out for themselves...Sakura picked out Chiffon Floral Babydoll Dress
that was pink,red,and orange wit a pain of pink pumps.Ino picked out a lavender eyelet dress with lavender strapys.They hid the outfits in Ino's closet and got into their pjs.Sakura had on pink hearts boxers and a matching cami and Ino had on matching cami and boxers that were purple plaid.

As they finnished changing tenten came in the room with a tray of junk food.The girls grabbed spoons and the chocolate chip frosting.They gorged on food and gabbed on for a while.


Earlier With Hinata


As Hinata walked out of the hotel someone else walked out that person went left when Hinata turned and walked right.

Hinata walked along the beach then she stopped and took her shoes off,she walked to the sidewalk near the Inn and set her shoes there.She went and walked along side the ocean,having the waves crash against her feet.The wind blew her hair and her dress everywhere.

'Wow its so beautiful out here.And it smells so good,I love the smell of the ocean.The breeze feels amazing.'thought Hinata as she just walked in the crashing waves

That person that went left walked back into the Inn went up to their room and onto their balcony just to look at the stars.At that same moment Hinata was looking up at the stars too.She was near that person's window her looking to the side,her hair and dress blowing.He looked out at her getting a glimps of her not knowing who she was.He went wide eyed starring at her because she looked so beautiful but she also looked like she couldn't be real beacause of how stunning she looked.He stopped starrinng at her.

"Hey guys come here!There is this drop dead beautiful girl outside on the beach!Quick hurry!"yelled the guy

Then Hinata realized that she still had her bathing suit on,she took her dress off while he was looking away when he looked back she jumped into the ocean.He was starring at her like crazy now,when she came up she looked like a mermaid.He stared at her while she swam under water.Then he called his friends again,while he did that Hinata got out of the water grabbed a towel dried her hair and her body,then got her dress on.When he looked out at her she was standing there looking at the ocean,he looked away for one moment in that moment Hinata ran down the beach a big gust of wind blew her ribbon from her hair,she disapeared to the guy,as he looked to where she was the gust of wind brought him the ribbon that flew out of her hair.

Hinata got her shoes and went inside to her suite without anyone seeing her.She changed into her pjs that were light blue cotton lace trim boxer short and matching cami.

"Hey Hinata,how was your walk?"asked Tenten

"Great!the beach and water felt so good,hey so did the party animals fall asleep?"said Hinata

"Yeah they did i guess we're off the hook for going out,but they will proboly wake up soon and want to play truth or dare since we haven't done that yet."said Tenten just then their was yawning

"Speak of the devils."Hinata giggled

"Hey lets do the bakery in the morning I'm not up to going out,lets just hang."said Ino

"Same here,what time is it?"Sakura said

"A little after midnight."said Tenten

"Perfect."Ino and Sakura said with a diabolicle look on their faces

"Whatever it is you two forget it."said Tenten Hinata nodded as both Hinata and Tenten hit Sakura and Ino in the face with their pillows

"Oh this means war!"Ino said

As the girls broke out into a pillow war.They brought the war onto the balcony,a couple balconys over the guys were outside on their balcony listening to their ipods.They looked over to see what the girl shreaks were and then they were hooked girls having pillow fights in small nightys.Naruto started laughing because earlier Friday Ino yelled at him saying girls don't do that when they were doing it now.

The girls stopped gave the guys a dirty look.Went back into their room out their room knocked on Itachi's door asked if he had an extra key for the guys room,Itachi smiled and handed the girls the room key. The girls opened the boys' door with their pillows and went out onto their balcony and started yelling "Pervert" and whacking the guys with their pillows. The girls stormed off.

"You are going to regret this."said Tenten and Ino to their boyfriends,the guys gulped,Hinata and Sakura gave the Sasuke and Naruto looks saying 'your life is going to be hell' then the girls left with diabolickle looks on their faces

"Guys I'm scared,what do you think they will do to us?"asked Naruto

"I don't know and I don't know when which just makes me even more scared."sai Shikamaru


With the girls


"Hehe we are so gunna get them that is our new project tonight or this morning."said Ino

"They are gunna wish they never went onto the balcony."said Sakura

"Ok lets start plotting our revenge."said Ino




Now:I am so sorry for the long wait for chapters but we've had so many finals,projects,tests,homework.I've been spending all my time in my room with my books!! ugh! well i am very badly burned too i was outside all day 4 skoo's field day blow up games were fun! I was also at my friends pool!I'm rereading twilight lol it just keeps getting better!! Well today was the 1st day of summer vaca 4 me it was great!!! well im going to get to bed I'm tired as hell! oh yeah the next chapter will be very interesting the girls getting revenge on the boys!! I will be starting Naruto:New Year back up!! well reviews and comments are very much loved!!!

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kogalover2013 on June 19, 2008, 5:49:29 PM

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kogalover2013love it

eelchic on June 20, 2008, 9:27:58 AM

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eelchicThanks!!^-^ missed u where have u been??lolz

kogalover2013 on June 24, 2008, 12:49:11 PM

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kogalover2013idk i found this 1 site deveant art with bad stories u should chek it out

eelchic on June 25, 2008, 1:45:39 PM

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eelchicOh actually I have an acount on their I read my cuz's art well more like comics but still...I only go their for the fan art lolz

kogalover2013 on June 25, 2008, 4:12:16 PM

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kogalover2013me 2 my buds r here

zerotimberwolf on June 13, 2008, 12:49:15 PM

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zerotimberwolfThis is going to be SOOOOOOOOOO funny I can tell

eelchic on June 14, 2008, 2:04:07 AM

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eelchicYeah it is....the reaction will be priceless!

erandor3 on June 13, 2008, 12:43:26 PM

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erandor3OH NOES HTEY GONNA TORTURE THE BOYS!why is it most girls r so evil....not including u eelchic ^^; ur not evil

eelchic on June 14, 2008, 2:01:17 AM

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eelchicaawww thanks =) but my brothers have a second opinion on that,lol! well most girls like to get back at guys 1 cuz they like em 2 cuz they started it 3 which is most popular cuz its fun lol,but the revenge wont be very drastic,just funny,and the guys will prob get the girls too! so it will be funny! again thanks ^-^ i dnt think im evil just 2 little nusinces think that...lol

erandor3 on June 25, 2008, 1:42:42 AM

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erandor3lolz *hug*=3

eelchic on June 25, 2008, 1:46:40 PM

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eelchiclol thanks *hugs back* ;)

erandor3 on July 1, 2008, 4:17:54 AM

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erandor3so u have any idea when the next chapter might be up?

eelchic on July 1, 2008, 5:05:47 AM

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eelchicsoon i hope my bros have been starting up alot of trouble so ive been busy wit babysitting,but im starting the next chapter 2day

erandor3 on July 6, 2008, 11:10:19 PM

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erandor3kewl cant wait for it =3 oh and if u want u can put Erandor in your story all you have to do is ask =3

eelchic on July 7, 2008, 6:33:11 AM

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eelchicthanks! ill keep that in mind when i get writters block new characters always help,lolz

erandor3 on July 16, 2008, 10:08:30 PM

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erandor3Yeah you can put him as the boys friend from back where they moved from and he moved there to for his families butchery and that he could hang out with them from that point on =3

erandor3 on July 16, 2008, 10:12:25 PM

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erandor3and he also works at the butchery since it runs in the family =3 lols im so smart oh oh oh i has an idea!you can make it so that a couple fo the boys and girls go to pick up some meat for their family and Erandor turns around and then then he gets glomped by naruto if u need a refrence pic of what he looks like just go to my favorites =P and yes you will have to keep his tail and dog ears those run in the family also =3 but idont care what you will make him wear as long as its cool

eelchic on July 17, 2008, 4:32:09 AM

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eelchicum I'll try 2 write that into the next chapter but I'm trying 2 type and its not relly working out so well cuz it sort of hurts since I sort of broke my left ring finger but i'm gunna try this weekend. but ur idea is helpful it mite not come up next chapter but proboly the next cuz I've had some plot ideas.But thanks so very much for helping me out I really appreciate it.

erandor3 on July 17, 2008, 10:02:36 PM

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erandor3no problem do i get a reward of some sort o.o?

eelchic on July 19, 2008, 1:37:37 PM

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eelchichow do u want rewarded?? a cookie maybe or watever

erandor3 on July 22, 2008, 10:56:22 PM

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erandor3idk u pick how ot reward me =3

eelchic on July 23, 2008, 11:36:37 AM

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eelchicno i dont know how so u can choose your own reward

erandor3 on July 27, 2008, 6:34:33 AM

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erandor3how bout a kiss? XD lol yeah right like that would happen =P

eelchic on July 28, 2008, 12:00:10 PM

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eelchiclol i wouldn't say never....;)