some poems i wrote
Submitted July 21, 2007 Updated July 21, 2007 Status Complete | ok, here are wsome poems i wrote.
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Chapter 1 - poems
Submitted: July 21, 2007 • Updated: July 21, 2007
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nothingempire on September 24, 2008, 2:32:47 PM
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bookworm369 on November 4, 2007, 12:05:46 AM
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wow these are so good!DocOck on July 31, 2007, 6:29:04 AM
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all 3 poems are great and sad but they are very true. friends turn their backs on you. when you grow up life isnt as easy as you thought. and people die everyday.especially because of drugs and depression. favesBlencem on July 31, 2007, 2:41:28 AM
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o.o me really likes the last one ^-^ They are all so emotional ^-^
luckylace222 on July 22, 2007, 10:04:21 AM
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XD This is awesome!!!!!! VERY VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN!!!! JUST LIKE InuNaruFable2'S POEMS!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!! I WILL FAV THIS!!!!*Favs* :3 My favorite is "A Voice."
InuNaruFable2 on July 21, 2007, 11:58:27 PM
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Very emotinal! I love them! Superb job! Keep up the great work! ~favs~Alice9912 on July 21, 2007, 10:17:26 PM
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they are very good ^^taurus92 on July 21, 2007, 3:38:48 PM
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wow, those are really good ^^full of emotion
and a good rhyming scheme =]
super_sonic2000 on July 21, 2007, 12:56:31 PM
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wow. i write poems but nothing like these. you are truly gifted!eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:58:10 PM
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thankies!!!!!!Ulrich101692 on July 21, 2007, 12:49:33 PM
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eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:54:23 PM
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thank you very much.SharinganKakashi on July 21, 2007, 12:51:06 PM
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thats amazing and 2 tell the truth im not a poem kinda guy awesome *favs*eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:54:11 PM
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YAY YOU LIKE EM!!!!!!!!!neodusk on July 21, 2007, 12:46:54 PM
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THESE POEMS ARE FILLED WITH SO MUCH EMOTION!!!...AND IT ALL RHYMES!!! HOW THE HELL DO YOU DO THAT!?!?
Awesome writing! :P
SnowKitty on July 21, 2007, 12:36:31 PM
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These poems are so sad, but they really are great! I can't help but think that these poems apply to your life. . . . . . . . Hm, oh well. It's probably not that big a deal. Once again, great poems!eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:37:15 PM
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the poems do apply to my life, kik, you got it head on!!!FFXgirl on July 21, 2007, 12:27:33 PM
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WOW, they are wonderful!!! Sad but wonderful! My real life frined InuNaruFable2 writes great poems. Can you please check them out for her, she won't make more ir people don't read them. She also says they need critging(SP?)Anyways, I love them all! My fav is friends.eriepilot44 on July 21, 2007, 12:28:59 PM
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tahnk you so much!
truely beautiful......