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Chapter 1 - Untitled

can not tell

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled
One day Brooke was at her friend's Sydney's they were alone( we really are'nt old anoth)then a fire started.At the titans tower they herd that there is a fire so they went to the house
oh my gosh the house is on fire what are we going to do we can help said the teen titans oh my gosh said Sydney . star get them out of here b.b almost ready yeah as beast boy was an elephant and water came out of his trunk when he tuned back to a human dang water is in my nose all man
do you two want to get some pizza yeah said the two girls then slade had to show up oh my gosh Sydney said run she hide under a table I am to said Brookenot so fast said slade and grabed her arm ahh!!!then Robin kicked slade in trhe face and he droped Brooke you made me breaka nailas she kicked him in the
chin he said we will meet again and dissaped do you girls want to be a titan yes yes yes!!!

THE END

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mew54 on June 14, 2007, 1:13:26 PM

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mew54is it real

friend on June 14, 2007, 1:43:20 PM

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friendNo it is not real it would be cool if it was

Falconlobo on April 12, 2007, 9:15:18 AM

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Falconloboit's cute and funny but maybe could use a sequel

Headywon on February 3, 2006, 2:33:23 AM

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Headywonomfg GREAT WORK?!??! WTF?!?! THIS SUCKS! I WRITE STORIES A HUNDRED TIMES LONGER THAN THIS PIECE OF CRAP AND I'M STILL NOT SATISFIED! WHAT ARE YOU, FIVE YEARS OLD?!

emereldstone on March 12, 2007, 9:54:23 AM

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emereldstoneMake it a little longer, chica. And try to use more punctuation so that its more cohesive. I like the idea tho.

dragonclaw on August 7, 2005, 10:18:41 AM

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dragonclawlol thats not bad! just make it a bit longer... he got kicked in the chin.. lol ^-^

Topaz on July 15, 2005, 12:10:52 PM

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TopazHee hee, that was neat. ^_^ I have no advice for you, except the stuff that I talked about in my comment on your other story. ^_^ Keep up the great work!