Chapter 1 - Gone
Submitted May 18, 2005 Updated May 18, 2005 Status Incomplete |
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Chapter 1 - Gone
Chapter 1 - Gone
Gone
I should've known from the start,
that he'd be the one to take my heart.
I was under attack,
He won't give it back.
I gave it away,
Before making sure it was ok.
I let it go,
So sure he'd make it grow.
I gave it to the wrong person,
Now I feel so stupid.
How could I fall for something so wrong,
He took my heart and now he's gone.
Gone with the one thing I need to survive,
without it all I can do is cry in a corner until I die.
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RiversBlood on August 14, 2005, 1:35:30 AM
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Very good. Like the structure of it, where you broke it off and shtuff. Vert good, very good.
I_luv_jesus on May 18, 2005, 11:10:19 AM
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