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Chapter 1 - Gone

Chapter 1 - Gone

Chapter 1 - Gone


Gone



I should've known from the start,

that he'd be the one to take my heart.

I was under attack,

He won't give it back.

I gave it away,

Before making sure it was ok.

I let it go,

So sure he'd make it grow.

I gave it to the wrong person,

Now I feel so stupid.

How could I fall for something so wrong,

He took my heart and now he's gone.

Gone with the one thing I need to survive,

without it all I can do is cry in a corner until I die.

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RiversBlood on August 14, 2005, 1:35:30 AM

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RiversBloodVery good. Like the structure of it, where you broke it off and shtuff. Vert good, very good.

I_luv_jesus on May 18, 2005, 11:10:19 AM

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I_luv_jesusWOW!!! That's sooo fricken awesome! I love your poems. I remember reading that one at Easter camp. I think that's it.
Great job! Show that to Miss Barber. I wonder what she would do. LOL
I have a funny picture in my mind.