Chapter 1 - raimundos loss
Submitted August 22, 2007 Updated September 15, 2007 Status Complete | omi breaks rais dads surfboard and runs off but when kimiko trys to stop him they take a turn for the worse
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Chapter 1 - raimundos loss
Chapter 1 - raimundos loss
raimundos past
it was a quit and peaceful morning at the temple all of the xiaolin monks were outside trainig except for one....
*flash back*
little raimundo: Daddy help me! im drownding!
raimundos dad:RAIMUNDO NO!
at that moment rais dad jump out of the boat to save raimundo once raimundo was in the boat it happened...
rais dad: its ok son your safe AHHH!
at that time sharks were around the area they were in and one of them got rais dad and pulled him under and he never came back up
little raimundo:daddy?..DADDY!!
end flash back
raimundo: all i have left of to remeber him is his prized surfboard
omi:raimundo we ran out of bag dummies to train on ohhh this looks good enough
raimundo:well i better go train with the guys...hey omi wha...OMI NOOO!!
omi: tornado strike water!
raimundo:omi what have you done
omi:it was just a board
raimundo:it was not just a board it was my dads!
omi:dont worry raimundo your dad can buy another one
raimundo:ok thats it im outa here!!
clay:whats wrong with him?
kimiko:ill go see
raimundo was so mad he decided to leave so he went to the shen gong wu vault and took the golden tiger claws
raimundo:golden tiger claws!
kimiko:rai no! hiyah!
kimiko grabs onto the claws hoping to take them away but when she got them she droped them in the vortex and raimundo and kimiko were
teleported to a island and the tiger claws went back to the temple
kimiko and raimundo;ahhhhh!! umph!
kimiko:ow!... um raimundo were r we
to be continued
it was a quit and peaceful morning at the temple all of the xiaolin monks were outside trainig except for one....
*flash back*
little raimundo: Daddy help me! im drownding!
raimundos dad:RAIMUNDO NO!
at that moment rais dad jump out of the boat to save raimundo once raimundo was in the boat it happened...
rais dad: its ok son your safe AHHH!
at that time sharks were around the area they were in and one of them got rais dad and pulled him under and he never came back up
little raimundo:daddy?..DADDY!!
end flash back
raimundo: all i have left of to remeber him is his prized surfboard
omi:raimundo we ran out of bag dummies to train on ohhh this looks good enough
raimundo:well i better go train with the guys...hey omi wha...OMI NOOO!!
omi: tornado strike water!
raimundo:omi what have you done
omi:it was just a board
raimundo:it was not just a board it was my dads!
omi:dont worry raimundo your dad can buy another one
raimundo:ok thats it im outa here!!
clay:whats wrong with him?
kimiko:ill go see
raimundo was so mad he decided to leave so he went to the shen gong wu vault and took the golden tiger claws
raimundo:golden tiger claws!
kimiko:rai no! hiyah!
kimiko grabs onto the claws hoping to take them away but when she got them she droped them in the vortex and raimundo and kimiko were
teleported to a island and the tiger claws went back to the temple
kimiko and raimundo;ahhhhh!! umph!
kimiko:ow!... um raimundo were r we
to be continued
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flying_Jone on August 24, 2007, 11:19:42 AM
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write chapter 2! love it! its very exciting ^^
*faves*