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Chapter 3 - an enemy among the boys

well,it's about hinata who loves....someone....and she finds him on her birthday...and is none of her fan guyz

Chapter 3 - an enemy among the boys

Chapter 3 - an enemy among the boys
Last time on my story:


negi asks sasuke to do a favor,and tells him the day

"Woa."Sasuke lookes at hinata."I'm surprised you still go here."

"Allright.Well,we better get to class."Negji says and leaves.

Later that day,after Sasuke got worn out from protecting her,hinata said,"Thank you for helping me."She also said to herself,"I love you,do you feel the same?"

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"Whos the new kid?"Kiba asks.


"hes sasuke uzumaki.at least thats what my bugs show."


"im the only uzamaki!me!he isnt an Uzamaki!he-"naruto rambled
"shut up naruto."


Everyone turned to gaara,who had a look of lust in his eyes...the lust for blood.
"thats sasuke....uchiha."
"What?!"negji stood,suprised, because he allowed an uchiha to help his cousin.


"what are you going to do?tell the head of the clan?"Everyone looked at him,expecting the same answer....yes.


"....no...i wont hurt Hinata like that.No one is allowed to.agreed?"


"agreed."
kiba thought,"hmm....i wont tell..."he started to walk through the door."I'll distroy him."




Meanwhile,sasuke and hinata were having a milkshake,and hinata blurted out,"look,i know your not sasuke uzamaki,but sasuke uchiha."
sasuke was shocked."how...you..."
"i had a crush on naruto,and knew he had no family.why'd you lie?"
sasuke fell silent.he didnt want to tell her his feelings,so he said,"i knew you were the hyuga princess,and i wanted to help you."
"oh."hinata said.
"it's good you don't love her,because you...."
sasuke turned around,and quickly jumped out of his seat.
"have to DIE!!!"kiba said as he demolished the chair in one punch.


"hey,where's kiba?"ino asked.
"i dont know...i haven't seen him since..."naruto startes to say,gasps,and starts to run to negji.


in ten minutes,sasuke was punched around,and kiba's about to finish him off.

"any lask words...uchiha?"kiba asks,and waits."NO?Ok."

He brings his fist up to deliver the final blow,and.....



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sorry guyz,you'll hear what happens next time, on SASUKE DEAD!OR IS HE?


the person who helped will have his/her name at the 1st comment thing.

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Kohakucrazy on November 23, 2007, 10:41:00 AM

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KohakucrazyWAAAAHHH!!! * Runs away crying* You're a meanie ya know that? But still..it was good..

GreyPichu on November 17, 2007, 9:34:32 AM

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GreyPichuYEAH!!!!I love this story so much! and u made that idea sound totally awesome! it kills me and i gotta know what happens next!...I can't wait!^^

GreyPichu on November 17, 2007, 9:35:17 AM

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GreyPichuif u need an idea, i'll be thinking for one.^^

hinaXsasuke4eva on November 18, 2007, 1:29:39 AM

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hinaXsasuke4evathx

hinaXsasuke4eva on November 17, 2007, 8:34:24 AM

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hinaXsasuke4evaspeial thanks to GreyPichu ....please help me with the next 1....except for what happens at the very beginning