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Chapter 1 - were r u

inuyasha losis kagome and well youl see wat hapins afterr he finds her

Chapter 1 - were r u

Chapter 1 - were r u


inuyasha is in a dark forest and he is looking for kagome that disepirder. He hers a screem coming from behind him he notist it kagome voice so he start runing to find her he sees kagome hanging from a tree. Kagome sais : well dont just stand their get me down from herinuyasha gets her down and ask her how she got their she sais she didint remember she sais all of a sodin evrethig went black and then nshe woke up hangning from the tree she also sais tha she lost the gewl. Inuyasha sais i dont cair as long as your safe and then he hugs her so thit and sais i was so scard i tot i lost inuyasha u were scard for me yes i was i dont now wath i would do whit out u she startid to blush and then thay startid to wack i was nit time so thei diciden to stop and rest for the night.kagome fell a sleep on inuyashas lap and inuyasha just wacht over her untellshe woke up during the night therefid inuyasha she crid out inuyasha said waths rong kagome im her a tar rold down her cheak and she said i had a bad dream i dremt that u ….



this is my first story so be nice ok comment please and im not shor if i shold do a nother story so  and tell me if i shold do a nother chapter . and sorry for the susspense

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onecanadian on July 17, 2005, 12:28:00 AM

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onecanadiangood story, way too many mistakes... it was hard to read and figure out what u were trying to say

Haritikae on June 28, 2005, 10:42:49 AM

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Haritikaegood but try using spell check :)

Inuyasha_one on May 14, 2005, 11:56:53 AM

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Inuyasha_oneoh and i did your request you asked me to do.

Inuyasha_one on May 12, 2005, 5:51:43 AM

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Inuyasha_oneCOOL!

Fujiko on May 7, 2005, 10:12:08 AM

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FujikoWow that was good, you should write another chapter... but there were a lot of typos. So next cahpter can you check your spelling??? It was a bit hard to put together what you were saying... so please check for typos and do another chapter:P