Chapter 1 - Death of a girl
Submitted August 9, 2004 Updated August 9, 2004 Status Incomplete | umm... Its something I must have wrote during a black out. I simply don't remember writing it.
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Chapter 1 - Death of a girl
Chapter 1 - Death of a girl
I try not to cringe when you touch me, but I do.
I cry every night in my room because of you.
Don't you see what you do to me? Can't you see the hate in my eyes?
I'm turning over, I'm dying as I speak.
You're making me run for cover, just leave me be.
You try to tell me it'll be ok, but it wont.
Did you know that you kill me a little every day?
DON'T THINK YOU DON'T!
Look at the hate in my eyes, you murderer.
How can you not hear my screams?
Take the pillow off of my face.
leave me be.
Don't try changing the fact that you're killing me.
* I know it needs work, but I would like to hear comments*
I cry every night in my room because of you.
Don't you see what you do to me? Can't you see the hate in my eyes?
I'm turning over, I'm dying as I speak.
You're making me run for cover, just leave me be.
You try to tell me it'll be ok, but it wont.
Did you know that you kill me a little every day?
DON'T THINK YOU DON'T!
Look at the hate in my eyes, you murderer.
How can you not hear my screams?
Take the pillow off of my face.
leave me be.
Don't try changing the fact that you're killing me.
* I know it needs work, but I would like to hear comments*
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YukinaObbsessionist on June 7, 2005, 3:34:29 AM
I like it, it's harsh, but it's coolio, a very thourough display of emotion. You have quite a bit of raw talent just waiting to burst, all in all great job! Please make more!!!! ~_^Night_Wolf on March 30, 2005, 2:17:00 PM
Night_Wolf on
Thats deep. i like it a lot.