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Falling Backwards

This is some random poem I came up with... It doesn't really make sense, so don't try to understand it...

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - Falling Backwards
Submitted: December 11, 2003 • Updated: December 11, 2003
Word count: 238 • Size: 1k • Comments: 8 • views: 224

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Never_Dying_Ice_Neko on June 2, 2006, 12:22:14 PM

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Never_Dying_Ice_Nekox3 I love it!
Lots of Goth Love
Neko
 
 
+faves! x3

L7 on February 4, 2005, 1:55:35 PM

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L7Awesome. +favs+

silver_dreams on June 30, 2004, 8:34:09 PM

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silver_dreamsexcellent work. very morbid, dark in an almost creepy sense. reminds me of something perhaps watching from the shadows as doomed souls enter a labirynth that they are doomed to wander in forever. kidn of like, a mocking thing almost. very good work.

Misurmora_Samurai on March 22, 2004, 3:34:14 AM

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Misurmora_SamuraiSweet dude.

krazykitsune14 on December 25, 2003, 4:11:55 AM

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krazykitsune14Wow, that was a very interesting comment... o_O I'm glad you like it! ^^ I wrote another poem I might put up later...

Selphius on December 25, 2003, 3:55:11 AM

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SelphiusOh yes... I REALLY enjoy the last four lines. This is indeed very dark in a sense of madness, like the darkness of the mind and the false visions of a lost soul slowly shaping one's sanity into... insanity. I like it. (Adds to favs)

krazykitsune14 on December 22, 2003, 4:48:11 PM

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krazykitsune14Um... I don't really expect anyone to understand it... ^^;; I don't even understand it!!!

supershykitty123 on December 21, 2003, 4:57:39 PM

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supershykitty123Uhhh...I don't uderstand it much!But it's still a good poem. :)