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Chapter 1 - the beggining and end

i tried to write this story before but it went funny so here goes

Chapter 1 - the beggining and end

Chapter 1 - the beggining and end
simba was outside pride rock pacing up and down he was worried about kiara because she was giving birth to his first grandchild. After an hour of waiting rakiki came out "congraulations you have a grandson" he said simba ran inside the cave he stopped and looked at everyones faces before running to nalas side who greeted him with a hug. "Dad" called kiara simba stepped forward and hugged kiara then he turned to kovu "congradulations" he said,then he spotted a small cub he was kiaras colour exept the brown tuft on his head which was his dads colour and at that moment a love began too grow in simbas heart "whats his name" he called to kiara "thara" she replied.
A MONTH LATER

"Thara dont go too far" called kiara to her cub who was running around the savvanah "he will be fine" kovu laughed "i know but what happens if he goes into the outlands" kiara replied "chill out thats how i met you" he smiled and kiara hugged him. Meanwhile thara was at the river and he wanted too cross he jumped onto the first rock then the second then onto the edge. giggleing he carried on running until he was in a unfamiliar place he looked around suddenly something hit him he turned around to see a foot a wet foot then he looked up and saw the face of a lioness "a pridelander" she grinned then thara heard a roar and was swept off his feet he looked and saw his dad had picked him up "son" she grinned "zira" kovu snarled "it mum to you" she yelled kovu rolled his eyes and turned to pride rock "you better keep that cub close or you might loose it" she yelled after him at that kovu dropped thara and turned to her snarling suddenly kovu was grabbed hold off "leave her son" simba said kovu immedaditly stopped and turned around picked thara up and went back to pride rock leaving simba and zira alone. zira looked at simba and grinned she leaped onto him and grabbed his neck simba choked to death. nala came running up "what have you done" she squealed "now we are even" laughed zira

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lionkingcreations on November 20, 2009, 4:08:44 AM

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lionkingcreationsi read it and i know it is not that good