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Chapter 1 - the captive part one

this is my first one piece story so be nice please

Chapter 1 - the captive part one

Chapter 1 - the captive part one
i was that night Usopp was making another one of his weapons Luffy was eating Zolo was practicing his sword fighting Sanji was cooking to satisfy Luffys needs [sanji had nothing better to do] Nami and Vivi were descusing meaningless stuff stuff and Chopper was reading while Zolo was practicing he accadently hit Zolo in the back with one of his sword ow watch were your going you cluts who are you calling a cluts candy sucker oh your dead Luffy jumped in the middle of them to from fighting hey no fighting on my ship yelled Luffy everyone else just looked up and then went back to what they were doing thinks for your help guys yelled Luffy sarcasticly mean while at the spider cafe I have gathered you all here to help me with a plan said captain Kuro so what do we get out of it said crocodial revenge my revenge on Usopp and kaya crocodial your revenge princess Vivi Arlong your revenge on Nami and of course we all want our revenge on that ruberised freak luffy and the other freaks on his crew too so you guys in yea said everyone at the same time number 2 going to have to get on the boat and kidnap usopp butchie siam and I will be waiteing in a row boat beside there boat so just throw him down to us then turn into usopp and get everyone on the boat to trust you we will call you when were ready for you trick them in to coming to Kayas village heres a map ok im ready said number 2

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sonicflames on July 13, 2006, 4:37:03 PM

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sonicflamesit kinda dosen't make sense u should edit and check 4 errors next time c-ya

luffylover92 on July 13, 2006, 12:46:23 PM

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luffylover92sorry my other chapters will be longer