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one piece

Author
luffylover92

Submitted
July 13, 2006
Updated
July 13, 2006
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 1k
Words: 282
Comments: 2
Views: 1,282
Faves...: 0
Rating: 0

this is my first one piece story so be nice please

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Category: Cartoons

Chapters

Chapter 1 - the captive part one
Submitted: July 13, 2006 • Updated: July 13, 2006
Word count: 282 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 264

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sonicflames on July 13, 2006, 4:37:03 PM

sonicflames on July 13, 2006, 4:37:03 PM (Chapter: 1)

it kinda dosen't make sense u should edit and check 4 errors next time c-ya

luffylover92 on July 13, 2006, 12:46:23 PM

luffylover92 on July 13, 2006, 12:46:23 PM (Chapter: 1)

sorry my other chapters will be longer