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Chapter 1 - Part 1

THis is a story my friends and me are writing!

Chapter 1 - Part 1

Chapter 1 - Part 1
(Buu is destroying planet Zapazoid)


Bran: How are the troops holding up?
Mad: not so good, buu has destroyed almost three quarters of them!
Bran: Get Brian and Nick now!
Mad: Yes sir!

later...

Brian/Nick: We're here.
Bran: Good the four of us must evacuate to a planet called earth. It's not safe here anymore, the planet will blow up any second!
Mad; but...
Bran: We have to we'll train on earth, if we even want to oppose a threat to buu.
Brian; ok then lets go!


BOOM! SMASH! CRACKLE!

2 years Later on Earth....

Brian: WOW! we barley escaped!
Nick: Yeah
Mad: Wonder where we are?
bran: we should be on kami's lookout
mr.Popo: Who are you
Nick: we're from a planet caalled zapazoid!
brian: yeah it was destroyed 2 years ago by Buu!
mr.popo: not him!
Bran:What do u mean?
Mad: you know him?
Mr.Popo: Yes, he has just destroyed our final defense. they were supposed to be the stongest fighters in the universe! but buu beat them, not even fusion and super saiyan3 worked!
Mad/Brian/Nick/Bran: WHAT!?
Bran: did u say super saiyan?
Mr.Popo: yes, why do u know of them?
NIck: do we know of them, we are them!
Mr.POpo: REally?
Mad: YEah, Zapazoid is the lost planet of the aiyans!
Brian: That's right! WE can all go to super saiyan 4!
Mr.POpo: That's great! do you think you could help us beat buu?
Bran: Sure we'd be happy to help u after what he did to us!
Mr.POpo: OH! Thank you. Yajirobe and korin are inside. they'll get you cleaned up and give you something to eat!
All: All Right!

Later.......

Brian: WOW! That food was awsome!
Nick: yea! but i couldn't eat another bite.
Bran: Ummm..... Mr.Popo do u know a good place were we could train?
Mr.Popo: Yes, it's called the hyperbolic Time Chamber. the gravity is heavier there, and 1 minute here is 6 hours there!
Mad: All right! This is great now we can improve our fusing and fighting skills!
Brian: but what if we get to weak and injured while we're training?
Mr.Popo: not to worry here is a bag of senzu beans for each of you.
Bran: What are senzu beans?
Mr.POpo: They're tiny beans that restore you to full health after eating one.
Bran: cool
Nick: Well, what are we waiting for? Let's go!


IN the Hyperbolic Time Chamber....

Brian: Wow! THis chamber really works, i fell much stronger.
Mad: yea, i think i'd be able to go to super saiyan 5 if there was such a level!
Bran: i think buu id still stronger though.
NIck: you do?
Bran: Yea, i mean didn't you see how easily he wiped out our forces, and then the fighters here. they were incredibly strong, so buu probly absorbed them making him extremly powerful.
Nick: Well then i guess we have a lot more training to do, so let's get started.


Later.....

Brian: man i'm exhusted, why don't we try a senzu bean and see if that helps.
Bran: Good idea.
Mad: Wow! I feel almost 10,000x!
Nick: Me too!
Brian: Maybe we don't have much more training to do afterall!
Bran: Hmmmm..... Maybe, but how can we tell if we're stronger than buu?
Mad: Easy, we have a 2 wasy battle. You and Nick fuse and me and Brian will take you on.
Nick: I see, and if we do really good then there's no way buu could beat us!
Brian: All right, let's get started!


6 hours later......


Mad: Mad I'm wiped out!
Brian: Same... u guys are really good.
Branick: Thanks, now everyone eat a senzu bean and then take buu down.
Mr.Popo: Wow you've done excellent traing!
Bran: Thanks, but i just hope it's enough.
Mr.Popo: I hope so because Buu has unimaginable power. Well. Good luck!


Soon....

Brian: hey Buu! Why don't you come over here and fight us?
Buu: Fine, but you should know that you have no chance.*does a little snicker*
Mad: Oh yea? Well, i think you might be quite suprised in what you discover.
Brian: Brandon, Nick, do it now!
Bran/Nick: Fuuuu-sion-Haaaaa!
Branick: alright Buu, let's go.
Buu: Well this is nothing new. And i'm not suprised!* Starts to laugh*
Brian: *attacking from above*Well then, are you suprised by this? Burning Spirit Slash!
Buu: What? Ahhhhhhh!*panting very heavily, and badly cut all over, and thinking to himself* What was that? It was so fast, not to mention painful. I've never seen anything like it.*now talking to fighters* That was just luck, i wasn't ready.
Mad: Suprised Buu? Well here's another one.*Starts to power up* HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!*is now SSJ4* Gee u look kinda socked, well guess what everyone of us can do it!*Branick and Brian turn SSJ4*
Buu: This is quite the suprise, but you still oppose no threat to me.
Mad: Why you! Final Ba....*Buu interupts*
Buu: Gotcha! Time to become part of me!
Mad:Oh NO.... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh!
Buu: Much better. Do you still think you can beat me now? I mean look at you. You dont' even stand a chance!*starts to laugh again*
Brian: You're wrong Buu. Branick and i have another trick Mad didn't know about. It's called double fusion!
Buu: What! No! But that means....
Branick: We'll have enough power to defeat you. Ok. Brian let's do it.
Brian: Right.
Branick/Brian: Fuuuuuuu-sion-Haaaaaaaaaaaa!
Brianick(can't think up names for my life!):Now who doesn't stand a chance? HUH Buu? Time to see what reall power is! Now, Super Flaming Ghost Kamikaze Attack! Hahahaha! I'd lie to see you fight these!
Buu: Those? Don't be serious! there shrimp!
Brianick: Fine, have it your way. Go Ghosts GO!
Buu: Gotcha! What?
Brianick: Oh yea, i forgot to mention, they explode on contact, and give you a nasty burn!
Buu:*in searing pain* Nooooooo!*now looking very deformed* You'll pay for that one, i promise you that!
Brianick: That will never happen because you're going to die now! Ultimate Big Bang Wa.... What? Oh NO! The fusion, it's wearing off! we're seperating!
Bran: Great, now were all seperated, and it'll be an hour before we can fuse again!
Nick: Then i guess we'll just have ti hold him off until then.
Brian: Well we'll do that, if we can,

To be continued.....







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legendaryshadowartist on May 3, 2006, 7:10:42 AM

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legendaryshadowartistpretty good but come up with better names i mean zapzoid?

guardianofanime1115 on April 28, 2005, 12:57:59 AM

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guardianofanime1115hey not bad....

MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on January 21, 2005, 4:48:05 AM

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MaZz-Da-mAsTeRoh and read my story if u get the chance and plz comment on it , see ya!

MaZz-Da-mAsTeR on January 21, 2005, 4:47:29 AM

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MaZz-Da-mAsTeRwat a cool story, i cant wait 2 see more.

K93200 on November 26, 2004, 6:31:52 AM

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K93200dragonballz is cool, i like fighting too

SassyBotan8990 on June 29, 2004, 4:21:14 PM

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SassyBotan8990Wow that is cool! i like it so far! i can't wait for the other parts!

BlackNinja on April 9, 2004, 4:10:37 AM

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BlackNinjaYea this is good stuff keep going, I like to see what happens next

lionlover13 on March 8, 2004, 7:06:30 AM

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lionlover13PLease continue the story! PLEASE!