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Chapter 3 - Star Rock Town

This is a story how I became a trainer!

Fanfic/OCs/FCS (c) Me
Pokemone (c) Nintendo/pokemon
If you still it then i won't kill you:)

Chapter 3 - Star Rock Town

Chapter 3 - Star Rock Town




After Jordan and eevees incounter with the beedrills. They found them selfs lost in the woods again and both very hungrey.[br]
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"Eevee we need to get something to eat......" Jordan wined laying on the ground.[br]
"Eevee...." Eevee replyed laying on the ground by her. Jordan and eevee hadn't got any food sense they where in Shine Town. They where only in the forest for a little while.[br]
"But eevee. Ya know what I can't wait for? our first gym battle." Jordan said looking up at the sky "I have a dream of becomeing a pokemon master...think it'll come true?"[br]
"Eve!"[br]
"Thanks. Well I guess we should get some food and find a gym huh?"[br]
"Eevee!" Eevee said jumping on her shoulder. They kept walking for a bit seeing a squirtle! [br]
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Pokedux:"In battle, squirtle can use water gun, it's a good starter pokemon for the starter trainer." [br]
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"Ok. This is gonna be easy huh?"[br]
"Eevee!" [br]
"Eevee use headbite!" Jordan yelled. Eevee jumped up hitting squriltle with a head bite. Both fell back ko'ed[br]
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"Aw danm......well good job lil'dude" Jordan smiled throwing the pokeball at squrtle. She waited for the pokeball. It stoped moving. Jordan picked eevee up and started dancing with a feeling of victory. [br]
They walked into town finding a place to eat.[br]
"Hey can I ask you if you konw where the gym is around here?" Jordan asked after eating.[br]
"Yes I do--" The waitress was ready to tell Jordan but someone interuped.[br]
"You don't have a snow balls chance of winning a battle against The gym leader of StarRock Town!" A man said then took a sip of his coffee.[br]
"I could win me and eevee can do it!" Jordan yelled.[br]
"If you want to win you better take that eevee to the pokemon center." With that he walked out.[br]
"Weirdo." Jordan mumbled.[br]
"Uuuuhh....oh yeah the gym's a few blocks over there." She pointed to a huge buliding made of rock.[br]
"I didn't even see that when I came in to town." Jordan said then rubbed her head looking confussed.[br]
"Oh well that's ok the gym's made of rock so it is kinda hard to see" The waitress said then walked away but turned. "Good luck with your pokemon mach"[br]
"Thank you" Jordan said putting some money on the table for a tip then ran out to the pokemon center. After healing her pokemon. She headed for the gym everything was made of rock. She walked in to the battle room and a light came on.[br]
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"So you've come to battle?" The gym leader spoke coming out of the shadows it was a girl the same age as Jordan.[br]
"Yes I have, I'm Jordan from StarLight Town."[br]
"Ok," The other girl said then jumped back to her side and said "Let's battle!" Thorwing a pokeball a geodude came out "Your turn." The girl said.[br]
"Go eevee!" Jordan said Eevee jumped off her shoulder on to the battle floor.[br]
"Geodude use tackle!" The ledder said geodude used tackle.[br]
"Eevee!" Jordan yelled. Eevee got back up. She sighed in relieave. "Eevee use sand attack!" Eevee used the attack. It had no effect.[br]
"Geodude use tackle again!" The ledder yelled. Geodude ko'ed eevee. Jordan ran out in the filde and picked him up. [br]
"Either way ya did good to me eevee" Jordan smiled holding eevee.[br]
"Good mach. But you need work" The gym ledder said the light's turned off and Jordan was left alone. [br]
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She went to the pokemon center. "I can't believe I lost..." Jordan sighed and rubbing eevees head softly then smiled and jumped up "Imma win this time!" She said. Eevee jumped in her arms makeing her fall backwords. They went to the park to play.[br]
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"Go squirtle!" Jordan yelled thorwing the pokeball squirtle came out. Eevee taged squirtle both where runing after each other.[br]
Jordan filmed them playing then some kid came over.[br]
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"Hey thouse your pokemon?" A boy a bit older then Jordan with borwn hair asked her.[br]
"Yeah why wanna battle?" Jordan asked.[br]
"Sure." The boy said then threw a pokeball a geodude came out.[br]
"Go for it squirtle!" Jordan pointed squirtle used water gun. Geodude used tackle.[br]
"Use aim and bubble beam!" Jordan yelled squirtle weakened geodude.[br]
"Ok, now use headbite!" She yelled. Squirtle used a hard head bite. Geodude ko'ed.[br]
"You did it!" Jordan said grining then Squirtle dove in Jordans arms.[br]
"Wow, that was pretty good." The boy said then geodude went back in his pokeball.[br]
"Thank you." Jordan smiled.[br]
"I'm Rockie. What's your name?" [br]
"I'm Jordan I'm from StarLight Town."[br]
"Oh, so you must be a pokemon trainer huh?" Rockie asked.[br]
"Yep." [br]
"Well that's cool I gotta get goin, but maybe I'll see you later?" Rockie said walking off.[br]
"Sure seeya!" Jordan said.[br]
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After playing in the park. They went back to the pokmon center. The next day Jordan was in frount of the StarRock Town gym.[br]
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"This is it." She walked into the gym. Seeing the gym ledder was playing with her little brothers and little sisters there were three boys and two girls they where playing with geodude. They all seemed happy. The ledder stoped wacthing them and looked at Jordan then said.[br]
"You've come back again?"[br]
"Yeah...sorry I came at a bad time.."[br]
"No you didn't! you guys mind?" She said looking back at her brothers and sisters they walked off the filde and wacthed from the bleachers[br]
"Do it squrtle!" Jordan said then threw the pokeball squrtle came out,[br]
"Geodude use tackle!"[br]
"Doge and use bubble beam!" Jordan said. Geodude was hurt bad[br]
"Now use head bite!" Jordan yelled squrtle did a powerful headbite like before. Geodue didn't move nither did squrtle then geodude fell and was ko'ed and squrtle was still standing but fell back words ko'ed to Jordan had won the mach![br]
"Whoa, that was good well I guess I better give you your badge now" She said geodude went back in his pokeball, while squrtle went back in his.[br]
"For real? wow I can't believe I won.." Jordan said.[br]
"Here's your bage" The ledder said with a smile giveing Jordan the badge. Looked at her badge that looked like a Crytasl. "Thank you"[br]
"Your welcome, I'm Hailey." The ledder smiled.[br]
"Cool, man ya konw--" Jordan was interuped by someone comeing into the gym. [br]
It was Rockie.[br]
"I'm back!" He said. They all huged it looked like a moive. Jordan wacthed. Later at Haileys house Hailey and Rockie both told Jordan what was going on.[br]
"Rockie's my older borther. He left after our mom died, so he become a pokemon trainer." Hailey said.[br]
"Yeah but it's harder then it looks. I was worryed about you guys so I came back and this time I'm staying!"[br]
"Good." Hailey said. She was intupered by a man who came into the house.[br]
"I'm home..." It looked like the man who said Jordan would lose, she did but she won the secound time.[br]
"Daddy?" Hailey asked the man. He noded and said. [br]
"Yeah I'm back..."[br]
Rockie jumped up looking mad so did Hailey Jordan just wacthed like it was a moive.[br]
"I konw you two must be mad---" He stoped talking when the two both huged him tightly.[br]
"Dad...." Rockie said trying not to cry.[br]
"...we missed you..." Hailey said. After huging they talked and there dad said.[br]
"You to need to go after your dreams not staying here wasteing away." There'er dad said.[br]
"Your right...but I wanna stay here and take care of the gym" Rockie said.[br]
"Well I wanna be a pokemon breader." Hailey said then ran to her room a few secounds later came out with a backpack "before I go...you to need to konw somethings..." [br]
Both looked at her.[br]
"Sally sleep walks at night and Billy likes to climb rocks and fight so your gonna have to wacth him most of the time and Tommy can't drink milk or--" as Hailey kept talking rockie said. [br]
"Wait Hailey!! I can't write that fast!!" He yelled while in the background the other kids hugged tackled there'er father.[br]
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Later on that day. Jordan had said all her goodbyes and walked out of town with eevee on her shoulder. She herd someone calling her name turning around it was Hailey?[br]
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"Jordan wait up!" She said panted looking up at her. "Do you mind if I go with you Jordan?"[br]
"I don't mind" Jordan said, then smiled. Now both where off to Jordan's next gym battle![br]

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MetaKnight56 on June 25, 2008, 5:07:17 AM

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MetaKnight56this is very good
awwwww the mom died
T_T

Falconlobo on November 7, 2007, 10:11:34 AM

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Falconloboit's okay but needs more spacing^^

marisa937 on June 25, 2008, 3:46:16 AM

marisa937 on
marisa937well i updated it so how's it look now?

Falconlobo on June 25, 2008, 3:49:46 AM

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Falconloboit's better but needs double spacing i think^^

i don't really follow Pokemon too much^^

Falconlobo on June 25, 2008, 3:48:17 AM

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Falconloboi dunno i have not seen it in a while