Chapter 1 - when you close your eyes
Submitted November 30, 2011 Updated November 30, 2011 Status Incomplete | I will not place summery this was a project for school I am bringing down the rating of a story I originally posted on another site and posting here to access it from school and also for people who want to read a tuned down version
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Chapter 1 - when you close your eyes
Chapter 1 - when you close your eyes
Rainsford yawned closing his eyes numbness slowly spreading through him he always felt slightly numb like everyone else did before he went to sleep
but this was not the going to sleep numb or the near dead numb he had felt that to but this didn't feel bad and his eyes closed blackness should have
then over taken his world but then he found himself opening his eyes to wind blowing in his face salt water assulting his eyes his senses seemed over
100 times more advanced as the wind howled what happened he blinked and tried to wake up but found he could not he pinched his arm he was not
dreaming it had hurt and still stung as he noticed he had claws instead of nail "STOP WASTING TIME THE SHIP WILL CAPSIZE IF WE DON'T GET IT UNDER
CONTROL Rain Storms Forest stop staring everywhere" he just noticed he wasn't alone and that he was on a ship hundred of people ran around the deck
grasping sails some appeared fairly human while others didn't even have a humaniod body and others seemed something in between some had went so nuts
that they just jumped the side he found his arms were gripping a piece of rope based down from the side the girl that had yelled at everyone was
glaring as she pointed at him at the end but that wasn't his name then he noticed his long brownish red black hair was whipping around him but it was
only neck length not ankel as it now appeared the girl was young 7 at the oldest pirate symbol on the cloth tied around her head shaggy clothes
large claws and a sword at her hip "Thats not my name" she looked at him conufsed "You must have been hit in the head I'm Kasi and your Rain Storms
Forest A Wind Demon brother to the leader of the Bloody Ravens Your a pirate now get this ship under control" Kasi yelled at him slapping him in the
face this little kid was crazy "I am not crazy I am also a mind reader I'll tell you everything you need to know in your head so you don't screw up
Kagura won't be happy about you forgetting everything" who was this kid who was Kagura who was Rain Storms Forest what was the bloody ravens in an
instant the girls voice had explained all this with out her lips moving The Bloody raven was a group of pirates that where actually led by a princess
who had run away they were all children expect himself and a guy named Maru even the captian herself was still in her teens but old enough to be
married and had went missing for several years this was there first day out after her return shoot even if this wasn't him he couldn't screw up he had
no clue what was happening but he knew He was a important person in this somehow and he was this important persons body he had to his best if Kasi
was right all he had to do was tie the flag into its post so the navy wouldn't see then as they sailed by in the storm he drew in a breath and
grabbed the edge to the smaller cabin like sticking out in front of him pushing up to pull himself up but ended up pushing himself al the way to the
top of the ship seeing the black pirate flag it was a skull with a bird flying behind it with black and red feathers he swiftly tied it to the pole
pulling the string tight if he had to do this he would do this to his best.
but this was not the going to sleep numb or the near dead numb he had felt that to but this didn't feel bad and his eyes closed blackness should have
then over taken his world but then he found himself opening his eyes to wind blowing in his face salt water assulting his eyes his senses seemed over
100 times more advanced as the wind howled what happened he blinked and tried to wake up but found he could not he pinched his arm he was not
dreaming it had hurt and still stung as he noticed he had claws instead of nail "STOP WASTING TIME THE SHIP WILL CAPSIZE IF WE DON'T GET IT UNDER
CONTROL Rain Storms Forest stop staring everywhere" he just noticed he wasn't alone and that he was on a ship hundred of people ran around the deck
grasping sails some appeared fairly human while others didn't even have a humaniod body and others seemed something in between some had went so nuts
that they just jumped the side he found his arms were gripping a piece of rope based down from the side the girl that had yelled at everyone was
glaring as she pointed at him at the end but that wasn't his name then he noticed his long brownish red black hair was whipping around him but it was
only neck length not ankel as it now appeared the girl was young 7 at the oldest pirate symbol on the cloth tied around her head shaggy clothes
large claws and a sword at her hip "Thats not my name" she looked at him conufsed "You must have been hit in the head I'm Kasi and your Rain Storms
Forest A Wind Demon brother to the leader of the Bloody Ravens Your a pirate now get this ship under control" Kasi yelled at him slapping him in the
face this little kid was crazy "I am not crazy I am also a mind reader I'll tell you everything you need to know in your head so you don't screw up
Kagura won't be happy about you forgetting everything" who was this kid who was Kagura who was Rain Storms Forest what was the bloody ravens in an
instant the girls voice had explained all this with out her lips moving The Bloody raven was a group of pirates that where actually led by a princess
who had run away they were all children expect himself and a guy named Maru even the captian herself was still in her teens but old enough to be
married and had went missing for several years this was there first day out after her return shoot even if this wasn't him he couldn't screw up he had
no clue what was happening but he knew He was a important person in this somehow and he was this important persons body he had to his best if Kasi
was right all he had to do was tie the flag into its post so the navy wouldn't see then as they sailed by in the storm he drew in a breath and
grabbed the edge to the smaller cabin like sticking out in front of him pushing up to pull himself up but ended up pushing himself al the way to the
top of the ship seeing the black pirate flag it was a skull with a bird flying behind it with black and red feathers he swiftly tied it to the pole
pulling the string tight if he had to do this he would do this to his best.
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