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corpse bride

it is story about victor and victoria in love but the corpse bride is in the middle of it

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Chapter 1 - none
Submitted: February 15, 2006 • Updated: February 15, 2006
Word count: 309 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 134

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Alejandropro on February 18, 2006, 3:40:13 AM

Alejandropro on (Chapter: 1)
AlejandroproOK, first of all: I'm not trying to be rude, but how old are you? It lacks grammar and punctuation. Besides, did you do this for a school report or something like that? Because, while I reading it, I could picture a 10-year-old little girl reading it to the rest of her class.

Take writing classes and try again.