Chapter 1 - life
Submitted November 30, 2006 Updated November 30, 2006 Status Complete | this poem is about how life is today
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Chapter 1 - life
Chapter 1 - life
we live, only to die
we want, only to be disapointed
we love, only to have our hearts broken
why do we live like this?
whats the reason?
life is supposed to be filled with happines
but no one cares
everyone has embraced the darkness within themselves
they embrace it
they make it their own
why do we live like this?
the bitterness and hatred grows steadily everyday
so, i lie in the shadows of myself, where i am safe
and long for diliverance
the torture and sadness grows within my soul
i look to the starless sky and cry out "why?"
but it is unheard
people seem to need hatred in their lives
they feed on it
it completes them
and still i lie in myself
waiting, for the time that i can walk this earth happily
but for now, this is life.....
we want, only to be disapointed
we love, only to have our hearts broken
why do we live like this?
whats the reason?
life is supposed to be filled with happines
but no one cares
everyone has embraced the darkness within themselves
they embrace it
they make it their own
why do we live like this?
the bitterness and hatred grows steadily everyday
so, i lie in the shadows of myself, where i am safe
and long for diliverance
the torture and sadness grows within my soul
i look to the starless sky and cry out "why?"
but it is unheard
people seem to need hatred in their lives
they feed on it
it completes them
and still i lie in myself
waiting, for the time that i can walk this earth happily
but for now, this is life.....
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james13 on May 6, 2008, 5:34:03 AM
james13 on
damn bro..thsi is werry true..i wondered this myself for a long time now..why do wew live so hated lifes?Spazz on November 1, 2007, 8:23:17 AM
Spazz on
You have no idea how true this is. Or maybe you do....
Probably so since you wrote it >.<
Very deep. Lovely lovely poem. At least it's not only me that sees life as she truly shines. Most candy-coat it.
-Spazz
alchemest1 on November 1, 2007, 4:54:12 AM
alchemest1 on
Deep and true my friend. You humans seem to need hatred to thrive. It's sad but true but such is life.fullnarutoZ on January 29, 2007, 7:07:59 AM
fullnarutoZ on
ummmmm............ since when are you emo? tht was like seriously......emoSonicandCloud4eva on January 16, 2007, 10:45:41 AM
aaaaaaaawwwwz thats sooo true man ^_^ i'll give u ur props*claps* *faves* ^__^ THAT WAS AWESOME I TRULY FELT IT ^__^ excellent writing ^__^ u r a true author