Chapter 1 - Fate
Submitted December 13, 2007 Updated December 13, 2007 Status Complete | Fate of a girl...
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Chapter 1 - Fate
Chapter 1 - Fate
she knows her fate
in a forever-swirling sea of despair she wades
she can't escape it, she always tries
pain and doubt all but evade her
she sees no light
she feels no emotion
no sanity, in this, her dreaded sanctuary
will she ever be saved?
she knows whats she's done
she shows no remorse
so she awaits her fate
in a forever-swirling sea of despair she wades
she can't escape it, she always tries
pain and doubt all but evade her
she sees no light
she feels no emotion
no sanity, in this, her dreaded sanctuary..
in a forever-swirling sea of despair she wades
she can't escape it, she always tries
pain and doubt all but evade her
she sees no light
she feels no emotion
no sanity, in this, her dreaded sanctuary
will she ever be saved?
she knows whats she's done
she shows no remorse
so she awaits her fate
in a forever-swirling sea of despair she wades
she can't escape it, she always tries
pain and doubt all but evade her
she sees no light
she feels no emotion
no sanity, in this, her dreaded sanctuary..
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james13 on May 6, 2008, 5:36:20 AM
james13 on
ok bro...not to be rude...but i didnt understand a word offo that..what is that supposed to mean...i got this abblility to sense feelings in writings and poems..if i am not wromg you had a lot off feeling sin this one but i just cant understadn itZenshii on December 18, 2007, 8:32:19 AM
Zenshii on
omg very deep...it's very sad...but in a good way :) Very nice!jeffhardy2345 on December 14, 2007, 11:27:56 AM
Thats... Sad But goodalchemest1 on December 14, 2007, 9:42:48 AM
alchemest1 on
Wow Mate. Deep. I feel it. Your really good at making us feel what you mean. I felt for her mate. Stellar work.Ranson on December 13, 2007, 1:13:00 PM
Ranson on
Your poems make the reader feel what you are trying to say you are a really good poet. I guess you have to figure out her fate on your own, hu? ^_^