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psychotic_Chipmunk

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October 4, 2004
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October 4, 2004
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umm its just a poem i wrote in the last 10 minutes of school

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Category: Anime/Manga

Chapter 1 - End

I showed you the way
i followed you there
i picked you up out of you despair
and in return what did i get
hate and sarcasim
ill never forget
i considered you my friend
i treated you right
all you did was give me a fight
you are not my companion or my friend
you arnt worth it so this is our end

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RiversBlood on June 5, 2005, 4:27:15 AM

I like this a lot but two lines irk me a bit i treated you right
all you did was give me a fight. It just seems a little wonky like you tried to get it to ryme to much. I like it though!

Yin-Yang15 on October 4, 2004, 9:30:19 AM

*gasp* That sounds just like me and Squiggles!O.o eerie... On the third line I think you meant to write "your" instead of "you despair"..lol^_^ bye Geesin!