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psychotic_Chipmunk

Submitted
October 4, 2004
Updated
October 4, 2004
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 0k
Words: 64
Comments: 2
Views: 554
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umm its just a poem i wrote in the last 10 minutes of school

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Category: Anime/Manga

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Chapter 1 - End
Submitted: October 4, 2004 • Updated: October 4, 2004
Word count: 64 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 142

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RiversBlood on June 5, 2005, 4:27:15 AM

RiversBlood on June 5, 2005, 4:27:15 AM (Chapter: 1)

I like this a lot but two lines irk me a bit i treated you right
all you did was give me a fight. It just seems a little wonky like you tried to get it to ryme to much. I like it though!

Yin-Yang15 on October 4, 2004, 9:30:19 AM

Yin-Yang15 on October 4, 2004, 9:30:19 AM (Chapter: 1)

*gasp* That sounds just like me and Squiggles!O.o eerie... On the third line I think you meant to write "your" instead of "you despair"..lol^_^ bye Geesin!