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Rave and Raven

rave a gothic teenage boy is saved by Raven a gothic teenage girl with magical powers Rave has no clue or trace that hes from the planet AZARATH and two souls start a journey with action twists and romance

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: The Choice
Submitted: August 1, 2005 • Updated: August 1, 2005
Word count: 162 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 159

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shadow_girl_1313 on February 7, 2006, 8:52:16 AM

shadow_girl_1313 on (Chapter: 1)
shadow_girl_1313could you seperate what they're saying and what they're doin, this would make it less confusing, other than that... it's very good

ravelution on August 1, 2005, 4:05:18 PM

ravelution on (Chapter: 1)
ravelutionThis is my first story on the site and i hope youl like it