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Chapter 1 - Untitled

So as you might have guessd if you've been to my website, Dusk Hunter is my internet avatar (for the most part). This is a poem I wrote when the idea of "Dusk Hunter" first came to me, 4 years ago in grade eight.

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled
As I feel the mist creep up my legs
It consumes the warmth in my toes
it calls to my body
urging me rest for all eternity.

For a moment I watch it
Twisting and turning like a snake
it climbs my firm legs
in a serpent-like embrace.

As the last bit of mist covers my body
smothers my muscualr build
closes out the world I have little need of
I lift my head to the sky.

I howl a welcoming to the moon
I howl a farewell to the sun
I howl until I am one with the mist
until I have become the Dusk Hunter.

"Dusk Hunter" whispers the wind in my ear
the words are carried through my fur
through my body as it pumps the adrenaline
until my hunger passes through my whole body.

I begin my silent hunt
the mist I waited for covers my presence
like a blanket over a sleeping child
I am the unseen.

Every step I make
every breath I take
everytime I set my paw into the cold soil
my lust only grows stronger.

I reach a cliff edge and stop
I can feel the last rays of sun disappear
this is my forest now
it is my turn to be favored, my turn to be feared.

I feel the cool breeze hit my face
it carries to me a message
it carries the scent of a young doe
just become an adult.

Taking advantage of the lingering mist
I howl one last time
I howl the end of the hunt
I howl to startle her into false awareness.


The mist carries my voice
carries it to the heart of the forest
and echoes it outwards
the doe turns her back to me.


I gain appropriate foothold
and I feel the mist move again
but I do not move with the mist
this time I would make myself known.

Sensing the mist rise
the doe turns back to face me
her lucid brown eyes
threaten to pull me in.

The last thing that little doe sees
is the mist fading into the sky
leaving behind a lone warrior
silhouetted against the darkening sunset.

Then, for that little doe, dusk, turns into night.

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WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on April 26, 2005, 5:35:36 PM

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WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2sorry for posting that twice- whoops! O_O;;;

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on April 26, 2005, 4:03:52 PM

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WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2this poem is absolutely beautiful (faves) one of the best i have read in a long, long time.

WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2 on April 26, 2005, 4:03:47 PM

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WhereDIDMyStressBallGo2this poem is absolutely beautiful (faves) one of the best i have read in a long, long time.

XSakuXSakuraX on October 7, 2004, 12:46:23 PM

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XSakuXSakuraXO-o Whoah Thats just awsome!