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Chapter 23 - the letter

i worked out the bugs!
anyway its about-wait a min, im not tellin u wat its about but i will only say:it switches narratives.(lil trick i learned frm mr.j.stroud,writer of my favourie trilogy)

Chapter 23 - the letter

Chapter 23 - the letter
After the last bell of the day rang, Renee rushed out of the classroom.
As she trotted through the streets, her younger sister, felicity came running after her.
Ren-chan! Wait up! she called. Renee stopped. As felicity approached, Renee
spoke:  please felicity, hurry up! I want to get home quickly!
but whats the matter? Youve been like this since you got that letter from Marco
the other day! Cmon, you gotta tell me so I can cheer you up! said felicity persistently.
its none of your business! snapped her sister and then she ran back home.
Felicity stood there, frozen with shock.
*******
When Renee got home, she ran straight to her room and lay down, crying, on her bed.
She clutched her pendent all the time.

A few hours later, Renee got up and went to her desk. She opened a drawer.
It was full of letters, some written in French, but they were al addressed to Renee and signed by Marco.
Renee picked up the top letter.

Dear Renee,

Im so sorry I havent written in a month! Its just that Ive been really busy.

Its just, the other day, a new girl game into our class. She was really nice and she sits

next to me! Anyway, we got to know each other, and then she asked me out! Can you

believe that?!! I cant believe it still and now were going out! Anyway enough about me-

whats been going on in your life?



From Marco


As she read the short letter, a tear fell onto the paper.
Marco usually wrote at least a page. And he always signed of love Marco-chan not
Just from. But what really burned her up was that he had found someone else. Sure,
Back two years ago when Renee and her family moved from France to Japan, she and
Marco were just friends but she had started to have feelings for him. But theyd
Been friends for so long, she didnt want to destroy their friendship-so she hadnt told.
But now . . . she didnt know if she could even keep writing to him.
Renee lay back down on her bed and put on her ipod.
She started to listen to wishes by superchick.
Just the her phone beeped.
She checked it.
It was a text from sally saying a another monster had been found.

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Sliv on March 12, 2008, 1:38:47 PM

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Slivlololololol that's cute!

swampertgirl0504 on March 12, 2008, 2:28:24 AM

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swampertgirl0504LOL!