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Chapter 32 - theres alot of stars(*) in this one

i worked out the bugs!
anyway its about-wait a min, im not tellin u wat its about but i will only say:it switches narratives.(lil trick i learned frm mr.j.stroud,writer of my favourie trilogy)

Chapter 32 - theres alot of stars(*) in this one

Chapter 32 - theres alot of stars(*) in this one
Even though it had only be winter for a couple of days, everything was already snow
White and glazed with the crystal like ice.
Chloe was taking a shortcut through the park to get to school. But she wasn’t late. She
Just liked the park because it was where she had learned she was a senshi.
As she happily trotted along, she noticed she was passing the pond. Well actually,
It was more like a small lake. Chloe checked her watch.
Another 15 minutes till her school started. Plenty of time. Chloe turned to the pond, rested her arms on the barrier and stared at her reflection in the Ice.
Something moved.
Chloe recoiled and then came back to stare at where she had seen the movement.
Nothing.
She decided it was in her imagination and went on her way.

*************
Alex was bored. Very bored. It was his day off and he had virtually NOTHING to do-
Except of course: doing essays, homework, cleaning out his falt, washing the enormous
Pile of dirty dishes or doing the laundry. But of course, being alex, he did nothing of the sort.
Alex was indeed, very very bored.
So, he called cerion.
‘hi! I’m bored.’ He said.
‘bored!?’ yelled cerion through the other end ‘BORED?! I JUST SPENT THE LAST HOUR AFTER SCHOOL GOING BARGAIN HUNTING WITH TRINITY! DO YOU
KNOW HOW LONG IT TAKES GIRLS TO-
Alex hang up.
Then he called a bunch of his other friends. They were busy.
So he called sally, just to annoy her.

*************
sally was very bored.
Then the phone rang and so she picked it up.
‘hi sally!’ said alex from the side.
She hung up.

*************
alex frowned at the phone as if it were the phones fault sally had hung up.
Then he cheered up and decided to give her a visit.

*************
sally was still bored.
There was a knock on the door so she went down and opened it.
Then she closed it immediately after she saw alex at the door.
About a minute later she opened it again.
‘your just doing this to annoy me aren’t you?’ she asked.
Alex nodded.
‘you bored too?’
he nodded again.
‘c’mon then’ she said.

*************
alex and sally sat on a bench, a pile of rocks in between them, in front of the pond.
They were having a ‘who can make the biggest crack in the ice?’ contest.
Sally was just about to throw her fifth rock when the care taker of the park yelled:
‘hey, you two! Stop doing that!’
he looked like he was gonna chase them, so they legged it.

*************
alex and sally had out run the care taker and were about half way round the pond.
Alex collapsed onto the snow.
And made a snow angle.
‘why am I doomed to have to like you?’ said sally looking down at him ‘your
so childish!’
alex sat up and gave her a ‘why’d you have to kill everything?’ look.
‘because that’s who I am.’ She said.
Alex just stared for a while and then threw a snowball at her.
‘oh no you didn’t.’
alex just smiled smugly.
sally bent down to make the biggest snowball ever but when she got back up,
alex had already made a run for it.
‘HEY! THAT’S CHEATING!’

**************
they had run about another half way round the pond, thus ending up where they started.
‘okay, okay!’ said alex half covered in the snow sally had been throwing at him ‘I give up!’
sally smiled, contented, and walked over to the pond. Alex brushed off the powdery
snow and came to stand next to her.
‘im bored again’ he said.
‘me too’
then something moved.
They both just stared.
Then alex poked the spot where he’d seen it with a stick.
‘alex, you idiot, don’t poke it!’ said sally.
‘but nothing happened!’ he said ‘…do you think we should go tell your talking cat?’
sally looked at the water(or should I say ice) again and then nodded.

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swampertgirl0504 on April 28, 2008, 2:08:38 AM

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swampertgirl0504when are Sally and Alex gonna start going out???