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Chapter 37 - the sun burns us

i worked out the bugs!
anyway its about-wait a min, im not tellin u wat its about but i will only say:it switches narratives.(lil trick i learned frm mr.j.stroud,writer of my favourie trilogy)

Chapter 37 - the sun burns us

Chapter 37 - the sun burns us
The next morning, sally woke up at 5:00am.
She dressed and went straight to alex’s flat.
When she reached his door, she sat outside his door.
Minutes past…half and hour.
Sally checked her watch. It was 6:15am.
Finally, the door opened and sally immediately got up.
‘good mor-’ began alex, but then sally grabbed his hand and dragged him down the stairs without a word.

Sally dragged a confused alex out of his apartment building, down the busy street, into a
bus, out of said bus mentioned previously, down another street, through the school gates
and onto a bench, all the while still holding his hand.
Sally jestured for him to sit down and then, after scanning their surroundings, sat down to.
‘what was all that about?’ said alex.
‘to make sure you don’t get ambushed again.’ She answered.
‘why are you bothered?’ asked alex.
Sally looked strait at him. He looked back.
Then sally pushed him off the bench and into a near by nettle bush.
‘why do you love to cause me pain?’ he murmered, pulling himself out.
‘I’m me’ sally replied daintily.

*************

Meanwhile, isis and Athena were watching the sun.
‘athena, it burns my eyes’ said isis.
‘yes…staring at a big flaming star isn’t as romantic as staring at a reflective moon.’ Agreed Athena.
Suddenly there was flash of light.
‘isis…what happened?’said athena dreamily.
‘I’m not- OH MY GAWSH ATHENA WHAT HAPPENED TO MY VOICE?!’ yelled isis.
It was true. His voice wasn’t all cat like and squeaky any more.
Well it was still a little squeaky but now it sounded more like how it did on the moon.
Isis held his neck.
Wait a minute.
He had a neck.
Isis looked at his paw. It wasn’t a paw anymore.
It was a hand.
Isis looked down.
He didn’t have a cat body.
He had a human one. And thankfully, he had clothes.
Isis looked at where Athena had been.
In her place was a beautiful young woman with blonde hair. She wore a yellow dress
And yellow boots.
‘you know isis, the clouds are much more beautiful then the sun.’ said athena.
‘your more beautiful then the entire universe’ he said.
Athena turned to him.
‘isis?’ whispered Athena.
He nodded.
Athena just leap to him and they hugged like there was no tomorrow.


…………….
Me:squee

‘isis?’ said athena after a while. ‘what do you think happened?’
‘I dunnoez’he replied.
‘don’t you think we should meet up with luna and artimis?’
‘I guess so.’
‘where do you think they’ll be?’
‘well theres only one place they could be!’ he said getting up.
‘TO THE ICE CREAM SHOP!’

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swampertgirl0504 on June 20, 2008, 7:09:28 AM

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Sliv on June 17, 2008, 11:46:52 PM

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SlivCats are so cute, even when they're humans. Meow meow meow.