Chapter 16 - Lost Love
Submitted February 10, 2007 Updated May 11, 2008 Status Incomplete | This is a story 4 my babe jordanthehedgehog! I know it is weird............well Enjoy God i love my Boyfriend so much /\_/\ I'm sorry If this is disgusting or something....but..it is a request..
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Chapter 16 - Lost Love
Chapter 16 - Lost Love
When the loving couple cam home Aj was crawling around, and at the sight of his parents he got up and clumsily walked over to them. “Mommy!” He barked. “Aj?” Kira barked happily and picked him up and hug the spazzed out baby. “Aww, isn’t that cute.” Said a voice. A grey dragon walked out of the shadows and laughed. “Who are you?” Kira said shaking. “My name isn’t important. Now, prepare to die Jordan!” He says as he pulls out a gun and aims it at Jordan. “Kira, I love you. Ok? Stay strong. Protect Aj.” Jordan says as he protects his family. “Be careful.” Kira says almost choking on her tears. The dragon and Jordan fought for a long time. The dragon looked mad and pointed the gun toward Kira and fired. “No!” Jordan says as he jumps in the way and gets shot. The dragon attacks him and brutally beats him. “Daddy!” Aj cries. Aj jumps from Kiras arms and kicks the dragon in the crotch. “OW!” The dragon fall to the floor, moans about it and flies away. “K-k-Kira.” Jordan whines. “I love you. Take care of yourself.” Just then he dies, Kira cried hard and she held his hand and cussed at herself. “We’re so sorry.” Sapphire says as she stares at Jordan. “Here revive him with this.” Said Firehead giving her a chaos emerald. Kira took the emerald and held it over her beloved. Jordan woke up slowly and Kira hugged him and cried. “I was so scared.” She sobbed. They kissed and fell asleep on the couch.
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ShadowAndMaria4Ever on May 1, 2009, 3:27:38 PM
I lost my breath and didnt even know it was gone until he giot revived with the chaos emeraldForestdahedgehog on March 6, 2008, 7:59:31 AM
OMG!!!U HAD ME SCARED 4 A SECOND THERE!!!THAN HEAVEN 4 CHAOS EMERALDS XD DX IF there wasnt 1,then,idk wat 2 say about itXD awsome though^^Falconlobo on February 16, 2007, 10:20:31 PM
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guees when there are no dragonballs handy a chaos emerald will doAlleyCat17 on February 15, 2007, 2:19:19 AM
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wow sad but nice.RogueTheBat18 on February 14, 2007, 3:29:33 PM
whoa, pretty goodxXHerMusicalAngelXx on February 14, 2007, 11:14:01 AM
Jordan's brave, that's good in a man, he should be able to do anything for his loved ones, and by far he's doing a perfect job at it.^__^I'm luvin it, sis!Bring up the next chapter....if there is one..O.ojordanthehedgehog on February 14, 2007, 6:24:30 AM
aww cute