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Chapter 1 - Untitled

This is one of my favorite poems. Its about how Kagome would feel if Inu died. PLEASE comment

Chapter 1 - Untitled

Chapter 1 - Untitled
A Lover's Ghost

Your voice still haunts me
In the darkened hall
Your face is in the mirror
But I know you are gone

Your essence lingers
in the air
Your footsteps echo
Yet your not there

I lose myself
In your golden eyes
Which fade away
with morning light.

You shimmer beneath a timeless tree
The place our paths first crossed
But every time I reach for you
From my sight you are lost.

I see you in my weary thoughts
I see you in my dreams
I see you everywhere, and in everything
.....Or so it seems.

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HotchickFruba on October 10, 2006, 8:45:38 AM

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HotchickFrubaAwwwwwww! nice beautiful
 

sangofan1 on July 23, 2006, 12:22:19 PM

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sangofan1awww thats so sad could i use it for one of storys?

Inu_lover1644 on April 1, 2006, 4:20:23 PM

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Inu_lover1644btw, PLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZ! check out my story its new and its my first one, if you don't want to then screw you!
nah I'm just kidding. =^_^=

Inu_lover1644 on April 1, 2006, 4:19:09 PM

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Inu_lover1644WOW, that is really good I like it. IT RHYMES! =^_^= LOL *favs*

Inuyashasbabygirl on March 17, 2006, 10:58:13 AM

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Inuyashasbabygirlwahhhhh that was sad. but i love it sniff...sniff. grabs tissue.

Mutos_gurl101 on October 28, 2005, 12:37:36 AM

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Mutos_gurl101This ia sooo wonderful, it makes you feel like your in her place for a minute... by the way thanx for checking out and commenting on my story.

:)

Animanic on October 27, 2005, 10:36:02 AM

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Animanic cool, so deep and passionet, like kagome was writing it herself.

*cat* I'm here kagome!

YOUR NOT INUYASHA!

I want to be...

love_bunny on September 6, 2005, 12:59:17 AM

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love_bunnyVery prettiful!

FallenShadows on July 22, 2005, 7:38:48 AM

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FallenShadowsI love your poem so much! And thanks for your comment!

Inuyasha_Demon_Boy on July 1, 2005, 11:58:46 AM

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Inuyasha_Demon_Boyit freaks me out. nice job *favz*

JamesMarsters on June 30, 2005, 9:14:36 AM

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JamesMarstersIt awesome. I like it a lot.

haruyasha on June 21, 2005, 5:11:06 AM

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haruyashaThat is so sweet

YukinaObbsessionist on June 18, 2005, 9:57:48 AM

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YukinaObbsessionistHeya awesome job! I luv it! *poem and artist to favez* Spectacular job! I luv it! Plez make more!