spring haiku
Submitted September 11, 2006 Updated September 11, 2006 Status Complete | My two plum trees are so gracious... see,they flower One now one later.
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IQQT on November 12, 2006, 2:13:10 AM
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That's great, only that their supposed to be seperated into three lines,5 syllables on top, 7 syllables in the middle, and 5 syllables at the bottom.thememorysnow on November 14, 2006, 7:15:48 AM
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thanks!nuts,when i looked in the book it was like this,you must know you're haikus!IQQT on February 19, 2007, 12:20:59 AM
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Your welcome! And I do, thank you, but this is a really pretty Haiku, even though it's out of order. ^_^(Note: When Japanese Haikus are translated to English, they aren't in the 3 line order, so it must have been a Japanese Haiku translated into English that you were looking at.)