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Chapter 1 - Break the surface of my fear

You know...just for when I want to randomly write something...maybe something on my mind. *shrugs*

Chapter 1 - Break the surface of my fear

Chapter 1 - Break the surface of my fear
Look into the mirror beside
Hiding what you had inside
Is it you or is it me
Alone in the world I have been
Running and hiding away myself
And the way I truely felt
Wanting it to end
Seeing no one who really cared
Knowing I was truely scared
But there was a voice that called to me

As the weeks pass
I feel like I've already passed on
In such despair that I hade been treated that way
Having him loose my trust
He thought I forgot about him and found a new
My life light's have gone dim
As he calls the end
But...I hear that voice

And finally at last
A gentle hand came down to grasp mine
The words were spoken as if I were important to him
As I look up into the sky
Feeling water rush past me
I break the surface of my fear
Being held in the arms I've wanted so dear
His smiled shined
Like the light I have always seen in the distance
He held me tighter as I shivered in the new world I was in
He said he'd stay with me forever and never let me go
His voice was the one I have heard

Months and months go by
And I have finally lived in the clear skies
His hand stays in mine
Just like the love we have should
No matter what they say to us
No matter what stands before us
My fear is gone
My love is here
His voice is the only thing I hear

Writing © Me
Artwork © Lane Hinchliffe


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qgcooper on July 8, 2008, 3:36:04 AM

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qgcoopervery cool poem....i cant write a poem for crap!!!!!!!!!
i also like the pic!!!!

emobuddie0 on January 21, 2008, 10:30:36 AM

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emobuddie0this poem is very good and its absolutely true.

i love u

vesblondie on January 21, 2008, 10:35:05 AM

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vesblondie*hugs* Thank you so much...
I love you, too

Irken_Akire on January 21, 2008, 6:13:10 AM

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Irken_AkireAaaaaw....this is a very meanfull poem. xD Im sorry. But its true, very nice! Also the picture. Nice job Lane! I love the coloring and inking!
And your poem! Very nice! ^^