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Chapter 1 - raikim story

raikim story

Chapter 1 - raikim story

Chapter 1 - raikim story
kimiko sat outside the temple crying because omi was critisizing her about her moves and that shes not as good as the others because shes a girl."kimiko..."rai asked "are you ok"? "what"!! Kimiko yelled. Rai sat next to her "dont listen to omi i think your jst as good as any body here". Kimiko looked up at him "thank you rai...but you dont have to lie to me"."Kimiko im not lying i think your pretty, smart,and...".Before rai could say another word Kimiko kissed him."and I love you".Rai whisped."I love you too" kimiko said and they sat together for the rest of the night.

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FredFredBurger123456789 on August 12, 2007, 1:32:25 PM

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FredFredBurger123456789short sweet and to the point, bravo
 

xiaolin1234 on August 17, 2007, 1:46:00 PM

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xiaolin1234thanks ^^

xiaolintitianfangirl on April 5, 2007, 8:06:46 AM

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xiaolintitianfangirlholly crap! thats short but I love it! very cuted for the first one ^-^

xiaolin1234 on April 7, 2007, 8:04:09 AM

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xiaolin1234thankies buddy ^////^

xiaolintitianfangirl on April 8, 2007, 4:35:51 AM

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xiaolintitianfangirlyour welcome sister ^-^