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Chapter 1 - Brocken Once And Now Saved

This poem is about me...that's all that has 2 b said...^~^

Chapter 1 - Brocken Once And Now Saved

Chapter 1 - Brocken Once And Now Saved


Broken Once… and Now Saved

There once was a little girl,

And she was lost and torn.

Whenever she tried to smile,

Only sadness was worn!



She tried so hard to explain her problems,

But people would just never listen!

And when she was shot down at

She thought that she would never get her chance to glisten…



But then one day when she thought all hope was lost

And no one cared for her at all.

And when a friend took her by the hand and promised that they DID care

She stood up and remands to always stand tall!

By: Justine Kay Tovsen


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Akira592 on April 15, 2006, 2:34:27 PM

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Akira592once again i LOVED it! BYE!

FullMetal_D on January 27, 2006, 6:15:43 AM

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FullMetal_DThis is so good. You are very good at making poems, I can't rhyme like you.

mikita_inugirl on January 26, 2006, 8:19:15 AM

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mikita_inugirlThat is really good! Love it! I have some poetry too that I have submitted into one group of poetry thingeys. ^_^