UnNamed scifi project
Submitted February 16, 2012 Updated May 26, 2012 Status Incomplete | Lor'ii a captain in the Go'Rathian Confederate is faced with hardship when her ship is attacked by an unknown enemy. Lor'ii, being Shar'iki and not human, must overcome the fierce racism that plagues the Confederate in order to save it. |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - The Attack
Submitted: February 16, 2012 • Updated: February 16, 2012
Word count: 967 • Size: 4k • Comments: 10 • views: 93
Chapter 2 - Two
Submitted: May 26, 2012 • Updated: May 26, 2012
Word count: 685 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 66
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WildcatGirl on May 28, 2012, 1:28:41 AM
WildcatGirl on (Chapter: index)
*meansluckylace222 on May 27, 2012, 11:20:02 AM
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So much medical and social dream! I love that all the conflicts/characters are already setting up a promising situation! Now if I can see all of this coming together, this would be awesome! Fabulous writing work! Fast-pace and not too slow-feeling!WildcatGirl on May 28, 2012, 1:27:51 AM
WildcatGirl on (Chapter: 2)
Thanks. That men's a lot to me :) I had hoped to make chapter 2 longer.... But I just didn't know how to do it without dragging it on. I promise though chapter 3... You'll love it :) I won't spoil it thoughRangiku on February 22, 2012, 4:20:17 AM
Rangiku on (Chapter: index)
Its like star wars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ferst sentense Tee Hee :)WildcatGirl on February 25, 2012, 9:07:47 AM
WildcatGirl on (Chapter: index)
I didn't intend for it to be star warsy. It's all original. It is scifi tho so I guess all scifi stories are kinda similarluckylace222 on February 16, 2012, 1:31:10 PM
luckylace222 on (Chapter: 1)
DANG it! She was out cold, struggled a little, then blacked out again at the end! LOL! I love how your story starts with action! It really brings me in! More more! I want to know what happens! WILL THEY GET EATEN BY MUTATED SHARKS?WildcatGirl on February 16, 2012, 9:29:07 PM
WildcatGirl on (Chapter: 1)
No spoilers! I'm working on chapter 2! It's the chapter where I start to show some of how the confederate is. The racism and anger. I'm glad you like it tho! I added the passing out at the end because in all honesty someone with such a massive head injury probably wouldn't stay conscious for too longBlossomHeart on February 16, 2012, 6:11:59 AM
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We need more ;P It's great I love itWildcatGirl on February 16, 2012, 11:24:41 AM
WildcatGirl on (Chapter: 1)
I'm glad to see everyone likes itthingy on February 16, 2012, 5:45:33 AM
thingy on (Chapter: 1)
Lol what everyone els said and I learned how to spell pods now thought it was podesWildcatGirl on February 16, 2012, 5:46:40 AM
WildcatGirl on (Chapter: 1)
Nope it's pods. It took me a million google searches to learn how to spell jettisoned lol. Thanks really. I've worked so hard on thisxXlittlestarXx on February 16, 2012, 5:44:03 AM
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WildcatGirl on February 16, 2012, 5:45:28 AM
WildcatGirl on (Chapter: 1)
Thanks! I'm working on it. Everything is original. The planets. Characters. Species. It takes time!veggieninja99 on February 16, 2012, 5:39:17 AM
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o.o ^^D AWESOME!!!! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!WildcatGirl on February 16, 2012, 5:43:18 AM
WildcatGirl on (Chapter: 1)
Thank you!