The Serpent and the Dove

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Submitted
February 23, 2006
Updated
February 23, 2006
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 9k
Words: 1,745
Comments: 2
Views: 1,522
Faves...: 2
Rating: 1

The Serpent is Wise, the Dove is Innocent. Two Prophets to usher in the new world...are completely different beings, yet completely the same.

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Category: Miscellaneous » Religion

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Chapter 1 - The Serpent and the Dove
Submitted: February 23, 2006 • Updated: February 23, 2006
Word count: 1745 • Size: 9k • Comments: 2 • views: 282

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Dragon_Buster on March 30, 2007, 6:33:00 PM

Dragon_Buster on March 30, 2007, 6:33:00 PM (Chapter: 1)

Aye, Trinity is absolutely right here. This is a very beautiful poem (note that I use the term "poem" loosely here, to include all forms of lyrical prose.). I think I see the metaphors of the Serpent and the Dove in two of my characters- two archangels of the Kingdom of the Empyrean. But alas, much as I would want to continue with my ramblings, I must stop. XD

Overall, good job. *favs*

Trinity_Fire on February 26, 2006, 6:40:02 AM

Trinity_Fire on February 26, 2006, 6:40:02 AM (Chapter: 1)

Ohh, this is just so amazing. Like a poem, but it's got so much detail and it's not restricted by a format or stanzas.
I might not be christian, but I do love the sound of many christian words and the religion- I in no way am against it, I simply don't practice it.
Words like requiem and sabbath and such, i adore them... makes the piece so interesting and beautiful, not like some other religious pieces.

I also adore how you've made the serpent a thing of beauty and wisdom, not of evil like is often seen...
And making the Serpent like the sun and the dove like the moon... a very lovely touch, and beautiful....

I adore this piece! +favs! Absolutely amazing. :)